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[Shonen] Kami to Sengoku Seitokai 23 by Lingwe

This is a Franky-House translation. However if you want permission to use it then just ask in the thread.

Title Page

(Text down the bottom)- Story/ Akabari Satoru
Art/ Takada Ryousuke

Character Page 1 (I'm only doing the names for these, sorry)
Left to Right, Top to Bottom
-Katsuragi Musashi
-Kagura Mami
-Kagura Tooru
-Hiiragi Nemu
-Mukutori Kaoru
-Mikoshiba Akane

Character Page 2

1-Kida Nagare
2-Senoo Ryuusei
3-Yukawa Atsuma
4-Yuki Hitsuji
5-Ooyaki Touko
6-Onijima Yousuke
7-Horie Mashisu
8-Horie Naju
9-......
10-Amada Hidemitsu

Contents Page

Chapter 23 Title - Akane's Love Issue (TN perhaps something more like Akane's Love

Issue would sound better)
Chapter 24 Title - Bullet of Memory
Chapter 25 Title - Kagura Tooru
Chapter 26 Title - Special Test
Chapter 27 Title - The Root of the World Tree
Chapter 28 Title - "The World Tree Chapter" Mami's Preparations
Chapter 29 Title - Mirror of Farsight
Chapter 30 Title - Stuffed Toy
Chapter 31 Title - Bonds

Page 1

-We've just moved here, my name is Mikoshiba. Please treat me well from now on.
-Come on Akane, say hello.
-For as long as I can remember my next door neighbour's son
-was usually laughing...
-Even though I was the only one who was with with him from the beginning...

Page 2

Title - Akane's Love Issue

-Wa~~a, Why do you wait outside the front of this house each morning!?
-Morning, Morning, Good Morning to you~~
-Our job is to protect you Musashi, the Acting President of the student Council.
-Hey...is it alright if you stop hugging me here please!
-It's dangerous for us to be outside a radius of 30cm from you!
-But that's...
(small text above Katsuragi's head) Out of my line of sight is...
-A...Akane!!

Page 3

-N..No...This is, / I have a lo~~t of things to tell you..!!
-If this pattern continues like how it has..I'll be killed..!!
-Akane...
-Katsuragi-sama!

Page 4

-We would like to wish you good morning.
-Na..Naju-san and Mashizu-san..!?
-Why...Why have these people come here~~~!!
-Katsuragi-sama...
-I humbly apologise for my rude behaviour up until now..To apologise for that time

please allow me to commit seppuku!
-Wai...Please stop!
-Waa~~This person is so extreme!
-Up till yesterday you were always complaining about him. Now look at what you are

saying!
-As if I could leave Katsuragi-sama up to a ruffian like you!
-What did you say you insensitive woman!
-Hmm, What's that you macho carnivore! Did you even put a bra on today?
(small text next to Katsuragi)It's been annoying since this morning
-Umm~~Katsuragi-sama
-Good morning. We've caused you a lot of inconvenience...
(small text next to Mashizu)I was able to release the new manga
(small text next to Katsuragi)It's like driving a sword into my back
-Ah..no..I'm the one who should be saying that...

Page 5

-Musashii- Let's go to school together!
-Yo!
-Kaoru, Nagare1
-Onijima Senpai!?
-Wahahaha! To show that I recognise you as a man, I will place your safety over

everything else!
(Text next to Onijima's head) Onijima Yousuke, 18 years old, Searching for a

girlfriend
-Th...Thank you very much.
-You're the Acting Student Council President! You should act more manly!
-Oww
-U~~h, acting in such a spurious way, trying to get close to someone perhaps....
-Hmm~~~Why are there so many people here? Around me...
-That's a good thing, it means you are popular! (smaller text) Girls as well as boys
-Last night

Page 6

-We are still not finished / with the recent event.
-At the time of the Ceremony the Council of Ten's leader, Hidemitsu's attacker...
-Even though we defeated the Valkyrie stuck to Mashizu, I don't think we have won yet.
-At that time I also felt two seperate Breaths.
-Mixed among Mashizu's Breath / there was a extremely heartless evil.

Page 7

-In other words the enemy is still hiding somewhere?
-So basically, In the Council of Ten if we take off the women and Onijima, that leaves

three people left.
-Isn't Yukawa Senoo's mask kind of suspicious...?
-Well..In this situation if the Committee can't narrow the suspects down, we should

think of places in the school where the enemey could be...
-The new enemy's aim is without a doubt
-The Acting Student Council President, Katsuragi Musashi!

Page 8

-We should increase the number of Council of Ten bodyguards for the Acting President.
-What will you do if the enemy is in those ranks?
-It's alright, they won't be able to make a move surrounded by the others.
-Umm, thats a good idea...
-Do not do that Mami-sama!!
-You'll try and act as a bodyguard for almost 24 hours a day, / That is a bad idea!!

It's dangerous!!
-Well Cousin-dono, I'll also act as a bodyguard...
(small text next to Amada)-Appearing infront of Katsuragi's house is forbidden. Please

think about your own safety a bit!
(small text next to Mami)-I still haven't said anything
-Musashi-kun...I'm worried about you...
-Please
-Don't leave those guys side...

Page 9

-Please...
-Wait~~~Musashi-chan
-Oi, wait up Musashi!
-Heey, wait for me Musashii!
-(kaoru) I've got your favourite
-(mashizu)Let's talk about anime
-(onijima)Do you want miyake or ume onigiri?
-(naju)I made you bento
-(touko)Drink this, Musashi
-They won't leave me even if I ask them to!!
-Onijima-senpai even came into the toilet with me!!
-Wait!!
-Wait up!
-Katsuragi-dono!
-Wah~~~What on earth are these guys!!
-Hmm..?

Page 10

-A..Akane..!
-Thank god, you waited for me..
-I'm sorry, were you waiting for long?
-No, not at all!
-Eh!?
-That smile just now...wasn't aimed at me...?
-The...they're eating a bento...the two of them...
-I don't know who the guy is...

Page 11

-Aah, found you Musashi!
-Wahahahaha!
-Alright, let's go Musashi!
-Waaaaa
-Now that I think of it
-I haven't spoken with Akane recently
-Musashi...I'll let you have me
-Not since then...
-She seemed like she was Worried a lot, was she angry after all..?
-That's why this morning your face was so...
-The smile she just made
-it was remarkably different...
-Akane was turning her head towards that guy...
--kun, Katsuragi-kun!

Page 12

-Are you sure that you are paying attention!?
-Uwau!! Mu...Mune!!
-What's with the "Mune"? I'm Nemu! Hiiragi Nemu!
-Uh..um..that is...
-Oh and another thing...
-It's gotten pretty big hasn't it...
-Eh..!?
-(handwritten)Although it's not futsu
-What the hell?

Page 13

-Musashi, I'll make dinner for you today
-Uh huh
-Hitsuji will also make it!
-Uh huh..
(small text next to Musashi)- Hey, hey, are you listening Musashi!?
-Somehow something seems off
-with Akane...
-Huh!?
-That is...
-That's gotta be Akane!!
-Uh..Akane
-Hmm!?

Page 14

-Musashi...!!

Page 15

-He's fast!!
-He's using his Breath!!
-GAARGH
-We messed up!!
-This is terrible...
-Musashi is by himself..
-Anyway, we need to catch up to him..!!
-The cookies here, they are quite tasty. would you like one?
-Mmm..Oh no, I'm fine.
-Hmm? Are you in the middle of a diet? You're already cute enough.
-Ah..no..that's not it...
-Eh, well that's fine, (smaller text) Couscous (TN WtH?) but enough about that

Page 16

-The important thing you wanted to talk about...what is it?
-Akane-kun...
-Um..Right
-Senapi...well...
-I...the thing is

Page 17

-Crap~~~ I can't hear a thing they are saying! What are they talking about?
-Actually, why am I even doing this thing?
-And also what's up with this!
-That guy looks like hes an idol, he's pretty cool looking!
-Huh? Is it possible that he and Akane eating lunch together are...you mean he's a

student?
-Akane, do you like this type of guy...
-Damn..I'll get just a bit closer to hear their voices...
-WAAAH
-Owow, I must have looked really pathetic just then!!
-I finally find you all alone...

Page 18

(text in top right panel)-What the..!?
-Tch!!

Page 19

-I hoped to meet you this way so that I could talk to you
-Acting Student Council President-san
-But, you were just running around all alone, it was..a little...sad.
-She knows who I am?...Who is that!!
-When someone like you is split up from their friends do you know what they are

called?

Page 20-21

-Vulnerable...!
-Hiiragi Sensei!

Page 22

-There won't be any complaints
-If I kill you right here, will there?

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Re: [Shonen] Kami to Sengoku Seitokai 23 by Lingwe

The following may need question marks.

-Hey...is it alright if you stop hugging me here please!
-Why...Why have these people come here~~~!!
-What did you say you insensitive woman!
-Hmm, What's that you macho carnivore!

-Kaoru, Nagare1
-Kaoru, Nagare!

-Mixed among Mashizu's Breath was there was a extremely heartless evil.
-Mixed among Mashizu's Breath was there was an extremely heartless evil.

-Is Yukawa Senoo's mask is suspicious...?
-Is Yukawa Senoo's mask suspicious...? or
-Yukawa Senoo's mask is suspicious...

-Umm, thats a good idea...
-Umm, that's a good idea...

-Appearing infront of Katsuragi's house is forbidden. Please think about your own safety a bit!
-Appearing in front of Katsuragi's house is forbidden. Please think about your own safety a bit!

--kun, Katsuragi-kun!
I'm not sure if it really is supposed to start with kun. The double hyphen throws me off.

-Senapi...well...
-Senpai...well...

-That guy looks like he's an idol, he's pretty cool looking!
-That guy looks like he's an idol, he's pretty cool-looking!

I'll try and leave the punctuation alone for the most part - the Tl knows the context in which things are said better than I do. But it's strange that some "..."s have two of four periods, although it might actually denote longer or shorter pauses. I'm also assuming that all the text will be capitalized, so I won't correct that.

Thanks for the TL.
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Re: [Shonen] Kami to Sengoku Seitokai 23 by Lingwe

-Mixed among Mashizu's Breath was there was a extremely heartless evil.
-Mixed among Mashizu's Breath was there was an extremely heartless evil.

Oops my mistake, this should be Mixed among Mashizu's Breath there was an extremely heartless evil.

I'm not sure if it really is supposed to start with kun. The double hyphen throws me off.

Yep, it's meant to start with the hypen.

I'll try and leave the punctuation alone for the most part - the Tl knows the context in which things are said better than I do. But it's strange that some "..."s have two of four periods, although it might actually denote longer or shorter pauses. I'm also assuming that all the text will be capitalized, so I won't correct that.

When the ... are longer or shorter it means that there were more or less ...s. I left the punctuation off the parts which aren't in a bubble since it doesn't seem right having a full stop when the person is thinking. Other parts where I left the full stop off were when the sentence carries on into the next bubble.

Thanks for the proofread.
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