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Old 06-25-2008, 09:47 PM   #1
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Alive Ch 20 by Nazarel

Could one of the JP-ENG translators check this? There are a lot of jokes that are tough to bring over to English in this chapter so I don't really know what to do about them.

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PG 5
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Text: In human hearts, there are things called holes.
Text: It's size varies upon the individual.
Text: As for power users...
Text: The deeper the hole, the better....

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PG 6
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Chapter 20
Title: Now, only that....

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PG 7
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Kanon's thoughts: ....Eeks, Hirose....!
Kanon's thoughts: That girl is there too! Just when I got her out he brings her back?!
small text: scary------
Kanon's thoughts: I wonder if they'll find out Kanon broke the lock....
Kanon's thoughts: Oh well!
Kanon: Yaho- Hiro-chan. A date with Megu-chan?

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PG 8
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No Text

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PG 9
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Hirose: We're here, Ochiai-san.
Hirose: Sorry for locking you up till now.
Hirose: It's alright to roam around.
Kanon's thoughts: Hirose....
Kanon's thoughts: No....

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PG 10
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Kanon's thoughts: That's not Hirose....!!
Owl: How is the result, Katsumata?
Katsumata: Wonderful.
Katsumata: Now we just wait for the union of allies and the recovery of "the Heart of Akuro"....
Katsumata: What to do about Kanou-kun.....

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PG 11
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Katsumata: The hole in his heart has deepened considerably.... What's more, the perfect destructive power that no one else has....
Katsumata: An unusually interesting subject but....
Owl: .....Still a pity
small text: Oh well -
Katsumata: Because I'm a collector. (small: You said)
Owl: One vessel is enough.
Owl: That person said so.
Owl: Either way, Kanou Taisuke will come to the lake where "the Heart of Akuro" rests.

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PG 12
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Owl: Only to die.
Yuta: Uwooooooo
sfx: zubabababa (crashing through water)

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PG 13
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Taisuke: Where are you, Katsumata?!
Yuta: Wait, Taisuke!
Yuta: You think Katsumata is in a place like this?!
sfx: icha icha (flirt)
sfx: icha icha (flirt)
sfx: rabuu (love)
Taisuke: Uuu....
Taisuke: Who should I know idiot!!

small text from right to left:
idiot-
idiot-
idiot-
biku*
biku*
bichi*
bichi*
*Swan boat tilting and splashing

Yuta: Hey, relax!!
Nami: I can't relax....
smalltext(girl): No, don't~
smalltext(guy): nyu~ (pucker)

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PG 14
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Taisuke: Anyway, are you looking for Katsumata, Yuta-chan?!
Yuta: I'm looking but.... The only clue we have is "lake" and it's so vague!
Yuta: And you just got out of hospital so....
Yuta: ..... What's wrong?
Yuta: What are you looking at?
text: chuu - (kiss - )
Yuta: Ba!
sfx: kya- (excited)
Yuta: Struggle?!
sfx: kaaa (blushing)

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PG 15
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Taisuke: Ah!
Nami: gakon (grab steering wheel)
Taisuke: Na-Nami! Wait a minute! (small:A bit more....)
Yuta: What? Something happened?!
Nami: Katsumata isn't here....!
Taisuke: Too bad....
Taisuke: Hmmmm.....
Taisuke: Let's go to this lake next!
Yuta: Why are we suddenly touring lakes? Is there a reason for it?
Taisuke: Yeah- In the hospital, Katsumata.....

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PG 16
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Katsumata: There are things called "holes" in the human heart.
Katsumata: Negative feelings make up part of the heart.
Katsumata: For example....
Katsumata: In your case....
Katsumata: Guilt....

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PG 17
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Yuta: Katsumata did what? Really?
Taisuke: "We are heading to the lake" he said.
Yuta: !!
Taisuke: By my bed
Yuta: Which part of that talk do you believe?!
Taisuke: But Katsumata said it!
Yuta: Are you sure it wasn't a dream?!
Taisuke: We don't have any other clues anyway. Let's go!!
Yuta: O-Oi!
Yuta: Oh man!

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PG 18
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On door: Kanou Yoko/Taisuke
Ryou: What to do....
small text: uuuun uuuun (hmmmm hmmmm)
Yoko: Hey you!
Yoko: What does a yankee* want with me? Revenge?
Ryou: Eh?

*Note: In Japan, "yankee" is a term for delinquent. Yoko probably says this because of the way Ryou dresses and the colour of her hair.

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PG 19
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Yoko: Very well!
Banner: Yoko Sensei is the best!
Yoko: Who wants to be re-educated by Teacher Yoko?!
Ryou: Ladies "Ruritateha"* Goddess, Ryou!
Ryou: The only result is death!!!
Ryou: .....I mean.... Fukiishi Ryou, please to meet you.....
Yoko: Ka-Kanou Yoko, same here.....

*It's a species of butterfly and the name Ryou's (ex)gang.

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PG 20
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Yoko: So Taisuke knows you.... I really thought it was revenge.....
Ryou: Sorry that I also just reverted to my old habits....
Ryou/Yoko: This person is the same kind as me....
words on amamiya's right: Wait
Yoko: Where did you get this photo, Ryou-san?
words above amamiya: what is it
Ryou: I got it from some flat-chested spectacled reporter.
Yoko: Ahh, that flat-chest.....
Ryou: This place was on the way home so I came by....
small text(top): What's this?
small text(bottom): Cool

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PG 21
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Yoko: And then?
Ryou: ......
Ryou: ....Your little brother is fine.
Ryou: It seems that he's continuing his journey well even now.
Yoko: Y-You met Taisuke....?!
Ryou: Yeah, along his travels.
Yoko: When?! Where?! Was he well?!
Yoko: Did he say anything?
Ryou: .....Taisuke, he......

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PG 22
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Taisuke: Because of me people have died.
Taisuke: It's dangerous for my sister if I'm around.
Taisuke: That's why until everything ends
Taisuke: I won't go home....
Ryou: I was confused whether to tell you or not
Ryou: But I thought I had to at least tell you he was alright.
Yoko: "Because of me"....?
Yoko: That idiot worrying again....!

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PG 23
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Yoko: And he said it was just some accident that time....!
Yoko: You....
Yoko: ....know where he is right?
Ryou: ....yes.

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PG 24
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Yoko: Come on....
Yoko: I'm not going to go after Taisuke.
Yoko: The mass suicides triggered some change....
Yoko: I know he's gotten himself involved in something.....
Yoko: But he wrote in the letter, "I'll definitely come back. Don't worry". So I'll wait.
Yoko: But.... I'm tired of waiting alone....
Yoko: Accompany me a while?

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PG 25
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Ryou: Eh.... But I'm driving!
Yoko: If you stay over.....?
Yoko's thoughts: Taisuke....
Yoko's thoughts: Make sure you come back!
Ryou: Darling, can I stay overnight?
Yoko: Darling?!

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PG 26
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Amamiya: Eh?
Amamiya: Kanou Taisuke's picture isn't here.
Amamiya: Hey, Oda-chan! You messed with my file, didn't you?!
Oda: I don't know anything. Maybe you dropped it somewhere?
Amamiya: I gave it to that person.....
Amamiya: And I thought I wanted to use it for the next investigation.... (small text: And I only had one copy)
Amamiya: The next location we were told to head for is -

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PG 27
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Amamiya: a police station where countless strange holes were found....
Amamiya: The same kind as in Kanou Taisuke's school.
Amamiya: According to witnesses, the culprit was a teenage boy.
Amamiya: Maybe it was Kanou Taisuke....!
Amamiya: Either way it's amazing....!
Oda: It's a horrible scene isn't it.... I don't want to meet Kanou Taisuke....
Amamiya: We're finally getting close to the source of the incidents. Hurry, Oda-chan!
Oda: Ok.....

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PG 28
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Taisuke: Alright!
Taisuke: Today we camp!
Yuta: It's, today we camp AGAIN.
Taisuke: Yuta and I will set up the tent so Nami will settle dinner!
Nami: .... What should I make?
Taisuke: It has to be this for camping!

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PG 29
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Taisuke: Curry!!
Taisuke: I'll leave it to you!
Text: Killing aura!

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PG 30
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Nami: Sei!
sfx: Dan (stab)
sfx: biiii (vibrating)
abovenami: fuuuu (breathe out)
Yuta/Taisuke: ....!!
Yuta: Taisuke, why don't you go make dinner instead!
Taisuke: What style was that....? (small: "Sei" she shouted)
Taisuke: So Nami....
sfx: gan (hammer)

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PG 31
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Yuta: Woah! Amazing!! Looks great!!
sfx: boro (battered)
Taisuke: It was pretty tough....
Yuta: But, didn't you make too much?
smalltext: There's still curry.
Taisuke: Really?
Taisuke: Where's Nami?
Yuta: Isn't she at the tent?
Taisuke: Nami-

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PG 32
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Taisuke: Nami, dinner's....
Taisuke: Eh?!!

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PG 33
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Taisuke: Ah....
Taisuke: It's not....!!
Nami: Kyaaaaaaaaaa
sfx: dosu (stab)
Yuta: Wh-What? That voice.... Is Nami nee-chan ok?!
sfx: Za (stiff)
Taisuke: No.... Nothing's wrong....
Nami: I promised so this time he's alright..... probably....
sfxbesidetaisuke: bikikiki (evil glare)
sfxabovetaisuke: shuuu (spraying)
Yuta: But....
Yuta: His head is spraying blood!!
textbesideyuta: Pull it out quick!!

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PG 34
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Yuta: Nami nee-chan?
Yuta: Why don't you eat here with us.....
Yuta: Taisuke, what did you do!
smallbubbles: geho (cough)
Taisuke: I-I didn't do anything!
Taisuke: Don't talk about that anymore!
Yuta: Fine! Disgusting.... (small: All sorts of juices are coming out)
sfx: kan (knock)

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PG 35
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sfx: kara kara (roll)

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PG 36
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Taisuke: Alright!
Taisuke: Now let's....
Taisuke: play with fireworks together!
Yuta: Fireworks.... Even though we might meet Katsumata soon....
Yuta: Nami nee-chan, he's celebrating for a strange reason.
Yuta: Why don't you tell him off!

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PG 37
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Nami: He might look fine on the outside but....
Yuta: And you just got out of hospital so.....
Yuta: On the outside.....

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PG 38
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text: An empty can under the brake....?!
text: Because of a thing like that, the 2 of them....!

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PG 39
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No text

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PG 40
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sfx: zaba (strong water)
Taisuke: Shit!!
Taisuke: It's not that! Right now....
Taisuke: Only think of what I can do now!!
Taisuke: Things that I have to do....

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PG 41
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Taisuke: To bring Megu and Hiro back!!
Text: I don't want to have more regrets
Taisuke: Definitely....!

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PG 42
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Taisuke: Phew....
sfx: pusun (engine sputter)
Amamiya: What?
sfx: pahu (engine cough)
Amamiya: No gas?!
Amamiya: What about the coverage of the police post!
textaboveamamiya: Because you took the wrong road!
textaboveoda: There's no navigator....
Oda: I can't do anything since it's already so dark.... I'm really hungry too....

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PG 43
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Amamiya: Go and find some gasoline, Oda-chan!
Oda: It's impossible so deep in the mountains.
Amamiya: Senior's orders, Go get gasoline!
textbesideamamiya: SOMETHING
Oda: Ok, ok.....
Oda: Amamiya-san is so cruel......
Oda: Bothered by her age but chooses the right time to use it....
Oda: That aside, it's scary....
sfx: kuu, kuu (owl)
sfx: kikikikiki (crickets)
Oda: I can't see anything....
Oda: What if a bear appears....

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PG 44
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Oda/Guy: BEAR!!
Oda: E-eh?
Oda: A human?
Guy: What? Just another person?
Guy: That was scary!
Oda: I didn't think there would be anybody so deep in the mountain!
Guy: Me too.... so, what are you doing here?
Oda: Actually....

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PG 45
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Amamiya: So slow!
Amamiya: We might have caught up with Kanou Taisuke by now but we're stuck here. How unlucky!
Amamiya: I'll give him a beating when he gets back....
sfx: ahahaha
Guy: You haven't had dinner?
Oda: Yeah, I'm really hungry~

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PG 46
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Taisuke: Why don't you eat with us?
Taisuke: There's a lot of curry and stuff!
Oda: Really?! Great!!

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PG 47
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Oda: Amamiya-san!
Oda: There's a campsite near here!
Oda: It's late so let's stay over there!
Oda: They'll give us food too!
sfx: go go (rub)
Taisuke: Phew
Oda: I found really kind people. Lucky!
sfx: gacha (car door opening)
Amamiya: Oda-chan, don't tell me, that boy....
Amamiya: Ka.... Ka....
Amamiya: Kanou....

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PG 48
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Taisuke: Good evening
Oda: Come on! It isn't cano it's curry....
abovetaisuke: Curry?
besidetaisuke: basha (mucus splashing)
underoda: bufu (shocked cough)
Amamiya/Oda: Kanou Taisuke!
sfx: biku (shock)
Taisuke: Wh.....
Taisuke: Why do you know my name?
sfx: dadada (footsteps)

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PG 49
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Amamiya: I found you!!
Taisuke: Waaaa?!

textfromrighttoleft:
What?
Whaaaat?
kyaaaaaa
kyaaaaaa

underoda: just died
Oda: Don't feel so good....

Chapter 20/ End
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Old 06-25-2008, 09:58 PM   #2
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Re: Alive Ch 20 by Nazarel

thanks a lot
you can expect new Alive releases soon, guys
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