Rosario to Vampire Fan Fiction 'n Stuff

[weview]

Hey everyone, wouldn't it be good if we talked about all the Rosario to Vampire fan fiction stuff in another thread? That way we can get even more activity in the forum.

Has anyone checked out any of the fanstories online? Some of them are actually pretty good. They're the kind of stuff you'd actually want to see in the manga or the anime (so long as it doesn't include any fanservice)

[GrrDraxin]

Has anyone checked out any of the fanstories online? Some of them are actually pretty good. They're the kind of stuff you'd actually want to see in the manga or the anime (so long as it doesn't include any fanservice)

I'm sure some of us have seen some of those. But I personally haven't seen any non-doujin fanfic stories for R+V. If you know of some, please do post a link to where they can be found.

[weview]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5136454/1/Kapuchuu_to_Vampire

heres a link to one of the stories. i found this one particularly interesting.

and my apologies for putting up two posts next to one another. although i was starting a new subject.

[GrrDraxin]

Thanks. Some of those were interesting, not entirely in character for some, but interesting.

[the follower 89]

oh fan ficton net, yeah have many good stories ther ^^

i was reading one that retells the event's on the first chapters of R+V, but they change tsukune for kenichi from histories strongets disiple kenichi, it was fun i stop at chapter 3 ^^

but aparnetly i missed the link >_>

[weview]

There is a Christmas story on there still in the works. It's an interesting concept and in the past chapter has bordered on erotic romanticism :P

Still very interesting:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4649686/1/Rosario_Vampire_Blood_Flow

Enjoy!

[GrrDraxin]

Hmm, after reading R+V: Velvet Moon, I think if the official series were to wrap up in light novel format for the final part, it might look a lot like some sappy romance novel. Minus the bits of poetry, and more action packed. A good ending non-the-less though.

[GrrDraxin]

Velvet Moon? I've heard that somewhere before. Is that one of the chapters?This fic is it: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4621365/1/Velvet_Moon

And as I said, it plays out like a sappy romance novel, with bits of poetry mixed in. Not that Ive ever read a romance novel outside of manga, but still...

[LordRichardWellington]

Sure Drax...

About the fanfictions, I'm just really glad that no one has mentioned/ posted a link to mine.

[GrrDraxin]

Issokay, cuz I've just been going through them at random. I'm still new to the site, and only trolling around the R+V section. Though only after reading 8 or so different fics, I'm only now beginning to pay attention to who the authors are. I'm "was" reading up on one by an author called "dogsfang", but the site just went down. So I'm gonna take that as a "Go to bed now, dude. Ya need to rest." So I am.

[LordRichardWellington]

lol, I've been a lurcking on Fanfiction for years. I don't understand the communities thing, but whatever.

Hmm... how to make this comment not spam... Oh, yes! I have recently gotten one of my friends addicted to the series and showed him FH. The down side is that he doesn't have any real computer access. But the point is he is addicted!

[weview]

I thought Velvet Moon sounded familiar. That isn't poetry, those are the translated lyrics to Dancing in the Velvet Moon by Nana Mizuki. It's the closing theme on the credits to the first season anime. The story is basically trying to follow the video that plays as the credits roll.

[GrrDraxin]

Well, we all know that song lyrics are just glorified poetry anyway, but it's nice to know the source is from the R+V anime.

[weview]

The fanfiction is actually fun to do. Try it out. I've already got something in the works on there :)

[GrrDraxin]

Actually, I had done a couple shorts in this thread while waiting for chapters to come out. But those were like, a while ago, so you'd have to read back a few hundred pages. I think like somewhere in the 300 to 400 page range.

[LordRichardWellington]

I remember those! Some of them were really funny, other made really good points about certain aspects of the manga.

The ones I did were just stress relief for the time when the chapters started lagging. I.E. last few of season one.

[weview]

Check out the Christmas story. Very interesting.

[TigersDemon]

um... christmas story is pretty vauge, link plz?

[weview]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4649686/1/Rosario_Vampire_Blood_Flow

[GrrDraxin]

I remember those! Some of them were really funny, other made really good points about certain aspects of the manga.

The ones I did were just stress relief for the time when the chapters started lagging. I.E. last few of season one.I remember that one now, you had posted that here too I believe. So... yeah. I'm thinking of breaking up and posting my "Tails of GrrDraxin" short stories. Though many of them are incomplete, they at least have a basis in some other anime, manga, game or book universe. One I recall was based in the Oh My Goddess universe, another based in the universe of Breath of Fire 2, and the character intro was based out of Star Ship Troopers. So in a loose way those stories tie into one another, though at various "times". I even had one I wrote that had a character loosely based on Dizzy from Guilty Gear, but all the rest of it was more or less in "real life", though most of those stories I hadn't touched in many years. I may just write a bit more on them just to wrap them up cleanly, sort of speak. That's so I can at least say that they're complete until I add to them later if I desire.

[LordRichardWellington]

Sounds like a plan. I can't wait to see them all, or most of them, in one place. I should re-read the entire first season and what there is of the second season and write and aim to complete a fanfiction.

I'd have to start after next wednesday if I did though... Anyway, I look forward to seeing everything come together.

[GrrDraxin]

Hey, I just had an interesting idea for a career that Moka and Tsukune could pull off fairly well. They could become magicians. Their act, call it The Exorcist, where Tsukune exorcises Moka(with a little added make up) from her inner form to her outer form with the help of Tsukune's "magic" cape and her rosary(naturally), to wow the audience with her sudden change of appearance.

Or They could do a theatrical play of his life at Youkai Academy, complete with actual youkai for the actors, all complete with corny on stage special effects for the transformations and combat. It'd be a great show of heroism and unity in the face of diversity. But a show within a show? Maybe.... but it'd be funny to see the series conclude it's end with that.

But maybe this crazy rambling is all do to sleep deprivation. I haven't slept well the last few days.

[TigersDemon]

that would be to funny!

[Kaiser Nicolai]

Hey, I just had an interesting idea for a career that Moka and Tsukune could pull off fairly well. They could become magicians. Their act, call it The Exorcist, where Tsukune exorcises Moka(with a little added make up) from her inner form to her outer form with the help of Tsukune's "magic" cape and her rosary(naturally), to wow the audience with her sudden change of appearance.

Or They could do a theatrical play of his life at Youkai Academy, complete with actual youkai for the actors, all complete with corny on stage special effects for the transformations and combat. It'd be a great show of heroism and unity in the face of diversity. But a show within a show? Maybe.... but it'd be funny to see the series conclude it's end with that.

But maybe this crazy rambling is all do to sleep deprivation. I haven't slept well the last few days.Dunno why that reminds me of a tv show named Avatar: The last airbender and a episode named "the ember island players"

[weview]

I got through writing a story.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5153838/1/Rosario_Vampire_Dark_Moon

[weview]

Lol. Fanfiction will have to keep me sane. Its been a while since I've read the first season or watched the anime.

Luckily its Summer here

[LordRichardWellington]

I agree; the wait kinda makes us walking tumors ready to blow.

Thank god for fanfiction.

[weview]

Its gotten to the point where I've actually started making a Rosario Vampire manga based on a fanfic I wrote. =P

[TigersDemon]

Wow dude. Really? are you for real?

walking tumors? dude, what the hell kind of books do you read?

[weview]

It's a nice metaphor. Makes us sound like we are practically the living dead.

PS. I'm dominating Rosario Vampire threads again :) Catch up guys

[LordRichardWellington]

Wow dude. Really? are you for real?

walking tumors? dude, what the hell kind of books do you read?

More like, "What the hell kind of s**t do you watch?" A Saw reference in this case.

But I do read some very interesting things on occasion.

It's a nice metaphor. Makes us sound like we are practically the living dead.

PS. I'm dominating Rosario Vampire threads again Catch up guys

Thanks for the compliment.

Also, I don't always have logical or important things to add.

Though I'm considering make a fanfiction.

[GrrDraxin]

Well, all things considered if I have time to kill I was thinking of writing my own fanfic of my Sick Little World. Of course R+V would be one of many sections in it, but not central to it I'm sorry to say. Today while I was at work (it's an off the tax books job.... unfortunately) I was throwing around the idea of how to "assimilate" the Borg Collective within 5 minutes of the innitial attack, but that's to be explored later.... If I ever get to writng that part.

And to Weview, I've been reading your fic... it's.... interesting. I've only read the first arc though, and only just peered into the second part. But I'll get to the rest once I catch up on my anime watching, manga reading, etc.

Though due to net lag, I never finished reading the rest of the resent chapter of R+V (manga), so maybe I should stop typing and get to reading now.

PS. Maybe I should get a life insurence polacy if I'm a walking tumor. I might die tomorrow, but at least somebody would benefit from it. lol

(by the way, 'LOL' is a great way to make things that would normlly sound depressing or threatening be funny.... even if it's a death thread for ones self or that of another. This seems to be my gaming group GM's moto for some of his more crazy characters. I like it, so innocent, yet so effective a mind trick.)

[LordRichardWellington]

Question: Is Tsukune still a class representative/did he actually join the Student council?

Or is he just a normal student who is part of the Newspaper club?

[GrrDraxin]

That issue seems to have been stagnated since it's mentioning waaaaay back in the first season. Though it seems that Tsukune's official status seems to be still the class rep, though I have not seen him do that particular job.

But it's possible that it was that he was class rep only for the first year, and thus now there is a new rep that has more time for the job as ms. Nekonome and the higher up staff (Headmaster) seem to be keeping Tsukune busy with much more important "extra curricular" tasks, like saving the world and fighting Anti-Thesis and Fairy Tail...... and any other threats to the safety of the academy, IE the Doppleganger.

One just might think that because of this, the Newspaper club may have taken over some of the responsibility that the PSC once had... that is.... BEFORE Kuyou was handed his humiliating defeat at Tsukune's hands. So it may be possible that the group has not only inherited those responsibilities inside the school, but also some issues outside of it as well. Being that the acquisition of Ruby and now Sun are the most stark of examples for this theory. So the NPC (Newspaper club) have also become a non-payed mercenary group as well as reporters for their school paper. Nothing like working for sole satisfaction that people are safe from the many evils of the world, but not getting payed for it....

[LordRichardWellington]

Thanks Drax! Then I'll just go generic and say news article. Though that means I'll have to adjust a few things later.

I'm actually trying my hand at a fanfic. Not a dead-from-the-start one like last time.

[Lingwe]

Here's my fanfic.

A Period at Class.

Tsukune walked in through the door.

Kurumu-chan wa genki ni "Ohayo Tsukune!" to.
"Good morning Kurumu-chan" Tsukune replied. Why the hell Kurumu insisted on talking in Japanese even though nobody else could understand her always confused him.

The lesson this period was english, even though the language that everyone was speaking was english. No, okay let's make it spanish just to keep it foreign. Or maybe it should be japanese. Okay, the lesson this period was japanese.

"Honto ni!? Sugeena!" exclaimed Kurumu. She always excelled at the japanese class, probably because she was really, really studious.

"What are you a man or something desu ka? Only men say things like 'sugeena'. If you are a woman you should say it properly, 'sugooi desu ne' desu" said Yukari-chan.

"Hai hai, to your seats" said Nekonome Sensei coming through the door. "Today's english lesson will be-"

It's a japanese class now.

"Oh, that makes it easier then since we are all native japanese speakers" said Nekonome Sensei.

I thought you all spoke english.

"No, you just translated what we were saying into english. We were originally speaking in Japanese, then you came along and started chaning all our words into english" replied Nekonome Sensei.

Oh...okay.

"Moving right along then...I mean, Ja tsugi wa nihongo no kurasu! Minna ga yoku ganbettekudasai!" to Nekonome Sensei wa (kore o tadashinakuereba 'Nekonome Sensei wa' kono ku no mae ni oishite ne). Nekonome Sensei started drawing weird symbols on the white board. They looked like little squiggly lines. Above them she was drawing english letters, thank god. Nekonome Sensei turned to the class and said "Mazu wa hiragana. Hiragana wa chotto muzukashii kara, konkai wa ha, hi, hu, he, ho dake o oshiteyaru".

"Kore wa ha" Nekonome Sensei said while pointing at the first syllable on the white board. "Ano...sumimasen desu ga, chanto hiragana tsukattemorau no?" asked Nekonome Sensei.

Fine.

ねこのめ先生は”これはは”と言う。

モカさんは”先生、私たちは漢字まだ勉強しなかった”と。　”あの作家は漢字を使っている。やめてくれ”と 。

"Fine fine, we'll talk in english then if you don't understand kanji...mattaku, I mean, geez" answered Nekonome Sensei. She then taught a whole lesson about Japanese in english. Finishing up the lesson 35 minutes later she asked "Are there any questions?".

"Arimasen!" replied all the students.

Tsukune walked down the hall and out of the school building. "Well that was the stupid fan fic I've ever been involved in" he thought to himself.

[LordRichardWellington]

Lol, Brilliant!

[weview]

I am currently working on the sequel as well as a Doujinshi of my first story. Sadly, I haven't focused enough on the love/relationship aspect of it but its okay.

[GrrDraxin]

Here's my fanfic.

A Period at Class.

Tsukune walked in through the door.

Kurumu-chan wa genki ni "Ohayo Tsukune!" to.
"Good morning Kurumu-chan" Tsukune replied. Why the hell Kurumu insisted on talking in Japanese even though nobody else could understand her always confused him.

The lesson this period was english, even though the language that everyone was speaking was english. No, okay let's make it spanish just to keep it foreign. Or maybe it should be japanese. Okay, the lesson this period was japanese.

"Honto ni!? Sugeena!" exclaimed Kurumu. She always excelled at the japanese class, probably because she was really, really studious.

"What are you a man or something desu ka? Only men say things like 'sugeena'. If you are a woman you should say it properly, 'sugooi desu ne' desu" said Yukari-chan.

"Hai hai, to your seats" said Nekonome Sensei coming through the door. "Today's english lesson will be-"

It's a japanese class now.

"Oh, that makes it easier then since we are all native japanese speakers" said Nekonome Sensei.

I thought you all spoke english.

"No, you just translated what we were saying into english. We were originally speaking in Japanese, then you came along and started chaning all our words into english" replied Nekonome Sensei.

Oh...okay.

"Moving right along then...I mean, Ja tsugi wa nihongo no kurasu! Minna ga yoku ganbettekudasai!" to Nekonome Sensei wa (kore o tadashinakuereba 'Nekonome Sensei wa' kono ku no mae ni oishite ne). Nekonome Sensei started drawing weird symbols on the white board. They looked like little squiggly lines. Above them she was drawing english letters, thank god. Nekonome Sensei turned to the class and said "Mazu wa hiragana. Hiragana wa chotto muzukashii kara, konkai wa ha, hi, hu, he, ho dake o oshiteyaru".

"Kore wa ha" Nekonome Sensei said while pointing at the first syllable on the white board. "Ano...sumimasen desu ga, chanto hiragana tsukattemorau no?" asked Nekonome Sensei.

Fine.

ねこのめ先生は”これはは”と言う。

モカさんは”先生、私たちは漢字まだ勉強しなかった”と。　”あの作家は漢字を使っている。やめてくれ”と 。

"Fine fine, we'll talk in english then if you don't understand kanji...mattaku, I mean, geez" answered Nekonome Sensei. She then taught a whole lesson about Japanese in english. Finishing up the lesson 35 minutes later she asked "Are there any questions?".

"Arimasen!" replied all the students.

Tsukune walked down the hall and out of the school building. "Well that was the stupid fan fic I've ever been involved in" he thought to himself.

Perhaps you should post that on fanfiction.net, I'm sure people would like it. But I think the category would be gag fic though. But if you do that, I'll have to go and really hunt down my fic snippets hiding in this thread somewhere and post those there too.

I am currently working on the sequel as well as a Doujinshi of my first story. Sadly, I haven't focused enough on the love/relationship aspect of it but its okay.

Can you actually draw manga? If you do, show us some illustrations, I'm sure most of us are curious about this.

[TigersDemon]

i know i am :D

[Lingwe]

Perhaps you should post that on fanfiction.net, I'm sure people would like it. But I think the category would be gag fic though. But if you do that, I'll have to go and really hunt down my fic snippets hiding in this thread somewhere and post those there too.

Alright I registered an account but they say I can't post any stories for two more days.

[Yasu]

That isn't really fair, huh. You register an account on Fanficiton.net, only to find out that you have to wait a couple of days before you are going to be able to post any of the stories that you have worked on. At the very least, you should be able to make a few changes to the story upon posting it online at that website.

[Lingwe]

It's to counteract 'spam' apparently.

[GrrDraxin]

Indeed it is. Meanwhile, I've been scouring the main R+V thread for my fics. I found one of them and it was my earliest one since I joined the forum. So I'm taking the scenic route down memory lane but skipping all non-relevant posts, though some are interesting.

[weview]

I've pasted the link to my one enough times, otherwise it would be annoying. However, I'm working on a new one as well as crossover with Battle Royale.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5204292/1/Youkai_Royale


Don't be too eager to post on Fanfiction. I know I've had to take down chapters and edit them too many times.

[TigersDemon]

well i already post things on ff.net but i cant update my storys for a while because i lost my password ^^;

[GrrDraxin]

Don't be too eager to post on Fanfiction. I know I've had to take down chapters and edit them too many times.
Why'd you do that?

[LordRichardWellington]

I got bored and posted the first part of my fanfic. I'll post a link when it shows up on the public list.

Edit:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5207950/1/Extend

[GrrDraxin]

Well, so far I have retrieved 7 full fic snippets, and 6 idea snippets. I'll post them here once I've finished my sweeps of the threads.

[weview]

Why'd you do that?

I don't know. Mainly because people keep emailing me to tell me to hurry up, and also because I'm not a very patient person :Jump_Roll:

[Lingwe]

Okay, someone critique this so I can decide to put it up on fanfiction.net or not. Note that the story isn't finished yet.

Going to University

Day broke bright and early over the new summer day. Tsukune's alarm went off 5 hours later at 11am. Struggling to reach over to his desk Tsukune pressed the off button and heaved himself out of bed. This was his last day of freedom before he was to head down to Nagoya University tomorrow. He had been accepted into the university somehow...who cares how. In a fortuitous turn of events all of Tsukune's friends had also been accepted to Nagoya University.
Tsukune's mother came into the room several minutes later and said "Tsukune, honey. Can you please vacuum the carpets, sweep and mop the floor, sweep out the driveway, and do some other cleaning today?". She tossed the blankets back and poured a small cup of water onto Tsukune's face causing Tsukune to sit up spluttering.
"What the hell was that for?" Tsukune demanded of his mother. Tsukune's mother looked back at him and replied "Don't be such a wet blanket dear", before leaving the room. God damn, ever since he had gotten back from Youkai Academy she had been up his case trying to get him to do boring stuff like cleaning and more cleaning. Why couldn't she just do it all herself and let him laze around. It wasn't like she had a job or anything, neither did he, but he was only 18 so it didn't count.
"Well at least she won't be bothering me any more starting tomorrow, which reminds me, I'd better pack" he muttered to himself. Tsukune pulled out his old suitcase that he had taken with him to Youkai Academy so many times. Throwing a bunch of clothes into-...neatly folding his clothes and then placing them into the suitcase in an ordered manner he had soon packed. "I told her that I didn't need to pack last night" he muttered again referring to his mother's nagging yesterday that if he didn't start packing tonight he wouldn't have time to get it done today. He wandered over to his laptop and packed it back into his carry bag. He had never bothered buying a console such as an Xbox or Playstation because he knew that consoles suck and PCs rule.

Tsukune placed both his suitcase and laptop bag at the entrance to his room, grabbed a towl and headed to the shower. Stopping to admire his buff body and manly scars in the mirror before getting into the shower...

...

...

Tsukune hopped out of the shower and towelled himself dry. Heading back into his room he donned a set of clothes and headed into the kitchen to have breakfast (at 11.50am). Luckily his mother had left out a bowl of rice, miso soup that he reheated, and some nori (he lives in Japan remember, you didn't expect him to be eating cornflakes for breakfast did you?). Tsukune picked up the nori and chucked in the rubbish.
"God I hate those. I can see why they call it seaweed in english" he said to himself.
"Now, now, don't be like that" Tsukune's mother chided him walking into the room carrying a basket of washing. She continued "You know the saying; if you don't eat your seaweed then you'll become too cocky". Tsukune rolled his eyes back at her.
"You know that pun only works in Japanese" he told her. You see nori, the japanese word for seaweed can be used as a pun with the word choushi ni noru, aka. get cocky etc. The conjugation of the verb noru turns it into norisugiru which is where the pun comes from. At least Tsukune wouldn't have to deal with his mother making Japanese puns that don't translate well into english when he was down at university (Tsukune probably lives in Tokyo which makes Nagoya part of the 'down' direction).
"Well I'm popping over to see Kyou-chan after lunch" Tsukune told his mother. Tsukune's mother looked a litt confused not remembering the name. "You know...Kyou-chan...my cousin" Tsukune prompted her. With a dawning look on her face as she remembered the not-mentioned enough cousin for people to remember her without going back and checking what her name actually was... "You need to finish your chores first though" she reminded him.
"Alright alright" Tsukune replied as he took his dishes over to the sink. He washed up his plates and then got started on the cleaning...

...

...

After finishing all the cleaning he had to do he headed outside and jumped on his bike. He would have preferred to have a car as many other 18 year olds from around the world have by their 18th birthday, but owning a car in Japan is damn expensive. Not only are the cars themselves super expensive, but you have to pay huge fees to the government for owning one, and have a car park available to leave it. So that means that in Tokyo (inner Tokyo, not the 'suburbs' of Tokyo, if anyone can even tell where they end and where the next city begins)...in Tokyo owning a car is relatively rare, which means the roads are a lot less congested than a city of that size would suggest. Bottom story is Tsukune is 18 and doesn't have a license, let alone a car.
Luckily Tsukune had arrived at Kyou-chan's apartment in the time it took to explain why he didn't have a car. He pulled out his mobile phone and called her number.
"Mushi, mushi?" he heard Kyou's voice coming over the receiver.
"Kyou-chan, it's me Tsukune. I'm waiting down at the bottom of your apartment" replied Tsukune. He wondered what exactly 'mushi mushi' meant...according to the dictionary mushi means insect, but that couldn't be right.
"Tsukki? Oh great, you've come to say goodbye. I'll be down in a second" Kyou answered back before hanging up. She grabbed her handbag. This was her last chance to get him to buy her as much stuff as she could. She wasn't going to let him leave today without having him spend at least 10,000 yen on her. Kyou headed down the elevator and ran outside, giving Tsukune a big hug and asking "So are you going to spend 10,000 yen on me today or not?".
"Ahahaha, you know I don't have any money Kyou-chan" Tsukune lied.

[GrrDraxin]

I'd say that's pretty good. The translation jokes give it a little extra humor, if all the characters spoke English in the first place. University, huh? They certainly will be the odd bunch I'd say. But I like it.

Anyway, I've finished scouring the discussion thread and found all my story snippets. I'll just paste them into this post and hopefully the server won't hiccup over it.

WARNING:Do not open all spoiler tags at once! You may overload both your browser and your brain at the sheer length of this post.

Most of these are just stand-alone stories but a few are interconnected. HOW they are connected you can decide for yourself. I'm flexible like that.



Tough Cookie

"That superior pride of yours is starting to annoy me."
Moka: "And what do you think you're going to do about it?"
"I shall crush your foolish pride."
Moka: "What makes you think you can?"
"Better question is; what makes you think you can stop me?"

3 days later....

Moka: What is this guy made of? nothing works on him.

*Yawn* "Is that all? Maybe I forgot to mention that I've devoured 8 galactic black holes, gravity nullified 2 more of them, which resulted in a very big and pretty kaboom, and a long list of other things I care not to mention. Of course, those were just the major things I did OUTSIDE the realms of hell. Well, you could probably guess what happened there, so I'll leave it at that."
"So, Shall we go for round 288?"

Moka: ......
"Good!"
*Katcha*
Moka: "Kuh, huh? What is this thing? It won't come off!"

"It's a training leash. It does 2 things; one, it takes outer Moka's look and power level and applies them to you. Second, it keeps her oblivious to anything that happens to you, as she is not the one being punished for being bull-headed as you are. So now you have to try and fill HER shoes. Also, if you think that running away is an option, perish that thought. You can't escape this."

"Now, even though one leash is visible now, in actuality, there are several leashes there. Those are judgment leashes, and they are akin to the fabled "red string of fate" and that they help gauge your progress. Those leashed are attached not only to your closest friends, but also to random people in this school, the more positive their opinions of you are, the less restraint on your powers, and the closer you'll get to returning to you're normal powerful self, and letting outer-Moka resume her life."

Moka: "Youuuu........."

"And another thing, your opinion of me is also a factor. So, think positive, act humble, be cheerful, and your acts of kindness, helpfulness and generosity, will be richly rewarded. You can change the world, but, you have to start with yourself first. Do that, and the rest will come easy."

Tsukune: "But, what about outer Moka? what's going to happen to her?"

"You needn't worry, their rolls are now semi-reversed. She'll come out when called upon, but only with certain circumstances. But with a little help, she should be more than capable of saving the day when the time comes. Her will to protect you Tsukune is the source of her power. Even this Moka isn't immune to that need either, as it will benefit her even more. Seems to be a common trait they both share. Get past the pride issue, and she could be as gentle and lovable as the outer Moka.... if she lets herself that is."

To be continued?



I'm about to demonstrate what extreme boredom does to one's mind. I'm going to see how THIS works.

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Strip

Moka D. : "I am superior."
GrrDraxin: "How come you sound like Xan Kriegor all the sudden? Well, never mind. Okay then, let's test your superiority. Take your cloths off."
Moka D. : ".... Wha?"
GrrDraxin: "I said take your cloths off. Right here, right now, in front of this audience." *waves hand toward Tsukune and the rest of the harem.*
Moka D. : "You think I'm going to do that just for your entertainment?"
GrrDraxin: "No~. But but it's not for my entertainment. It's to prove that you do indeed have fear....... the fear of embarrassment. Your SVP is the on the same level as your feminine modesty. If you can't do something so simple as to go against the social norms imposed on all of us, you'll never know what true strength really is."
Moka D. : "Hmph. Idiot, I don't need that kind of thing."
GrrDraxin: "Hooooooh? Well then, lets try this." *Snaps fingers, and a thermos of tea appears in his hands along with a small device*
Moka D. : "I'm not interested in having tea with you."
GrrDraxin: "It's not for you, it's for me." *opens thermos and drops the device in* "There, that'll do it."
Moka D. : "........."
GrrDraxin: "Alright, I challenge you to a duel. And you shall do it as you are."
Moka D. : "What do you mean?"
GrrDraxin: "Doesn't it feel a little drafty to you?"
Moka D. : "Now that you mention it...." *realizes she's no longer clothed* "When did you.....?"
GrrDraxin: *lifts the thermos of tea to show* "Well, this thing served it's purpose." *Then throws the thermos far, far away. It explodes in mid-flight because the device overloaded*
Moka D. : "That's a dirty trick! I will not stand to be humiliated like this!"
GrrDraxin: "Then fight me. Prove to me that you won't let your petty pride issues get in your way of being who you really want to be."
Moka D. : "That's it? That's what this is about? Such a simple matter."
GrrDraxin: "Bad habits are not so easy to overcome Moka. This isn't going to be as easy as you think." *grins evily* "This is only the tip of the ice berg that you are about to ram head-on into."

------------ End ---------

I just love picking on her like that in my own mind. It's so refreshing.

------------- Lier Lier Moka? --------

GrrDraxin: So Moka, how do you feel about Tsukune?
Moka: Hmph.....
GrrDraxin: Ah. So that's how you wanna be.
Moka: I don't need to tell you anything.
GrrDraxin: Oh? Sorry then. Here catch. *throws an energy ball at her*
Moka: !!!? *she dodges, but it's homing, she blocks instead*
Moka: ? That was a weak attack.
GrrDraxin: It wasn't an attack, but it did it's job.
Moka: Huh? It was something weird again wasn't it?
GrrDraxin: *smiles* How do you feel about Tsukune?
Moka: I like him a lot, but I just wish he'd think about his own safety sometimes.
*Moka's expression changes as she realizes what she just said, she covers her mouth, eyes open wide*
GrrDraxin: *smiles much bigger now* Okay people, let those questions fly, she'll answer anything honestly. And she can't run away or pound someone into submission for asking her embarrassing questions either.

------------- FIN? --------------


[Ah, must resist urge to play bad guy.... no..... it's not working! Ahhhh!]


Quote from ch 39:
Moka: Who you choose as your companion… Remaining in the human world… Or being a resident in the Monster World… When the time comes you’ll need to give yourself an answer. Don’t forget my words, Tsukune.

-------- Starting the Imaginary Engine ---------

GrrDraxin: Ohh, looks like a party. Tsukune you bring the hot dogs, Moka you bring the buns. When you put them together you'll have plenty of fun. By the way, well said, Moka.

Moka: Who're you?

GrrDraxin: Nobody you should be concerned with. Anyway, He isn't the only one who has such a heavy decision to make... You too will have to make a decision on your course of action when the time comes as well.

Moka: ???

GrrDraxin: Hmph, I figured....... Your situation is a rather unique one. Because, whether you like it or not, you yourself have also been drawn into this as well, not just your other half. You actually hold 2 places as far the the runnings are concerned. Your other half holds the first place position as most likely to be chosen, while you yourself hold the very last position due to your lack of interest. Everybody else over there.... *points to the downed girls* ...They hold positions in between.

Moka: *Glares silently*

GrrDraxin: Even though you give such great speeches about such matters, you seems to be under the impression that you don't stand a chance, or that you have no interest in the matter. However, in either case, it was you that started this whole rat race to begin with. And it is now your duty being the instigator to see this through to it's conclusion. So you are left with 1 of 2 choices, you can either join the race sincerely, or you can let your other half take the credit for getting you a husband..... sort of speak. Though if I were you, I'd be kind of careful with your other half. If you start having conflicts with yourself, it could get pretty messy upstairs. *points to his head signing to her about her own head*

Moka: What would you know about it? [skipping any philosophical babble she'd say]

GrrDraxin: *rolls eyes* Yes yes, deny it all you like, but I see it like this: If by chance Tsukune doesn't choose your other half, it'd break her heart pretty badly. Which in turn would be the same as breaking your heart.... Not a good thing I'm betting. That just might be enough to trigger your own downfall, making you that much more bitter and distrustful. At least if you join, you may be able to find just a little bit of happiness. Who wouldn't want to? They believe that he's thier path to happiness, your other half thinks so too. Why should you be any different?

Moka: *cringes a bit* What are you, a psychiatrist? Do you think that pointing out my flaws and weaknesses is going to change anything?

GrrDraxin: No, but the hope is that you gain a slightly broader view of the big picture that you are a part of. And despite your cold attitude, it's obvious to some onlookers that under all that clout you surround yourself with, you really do care for this boy. From a slightly different perspective, your other half is simply a reflection of your true desires. Stripping you of your pride and arrogance would in fact yield the type of person that your other half is. The kind of person you cannot be, so you hand off to her such things as sentimentality, kindness and other things which your pride and arrogance deem as weak qualities for a vampire of your level. I can see how it's necessary to use this approach to get along in the human world, and the situation with Tsukune here has benefited you quite well. Though you still have some issues of "honesty with yourself" you need to work out, Life for you could be pretty sweet.

Moka: *grits her teeth* Don't you ever shut up? You're giving me a headache just listening to you going on and on.

GrrDraxin: *smiles* At least you didn't contest what I've said. *suddenly I'm behind her* So I'll leave you with these words. *I say into her ear, so close she can feel my breath*

* Moka goes to back-fist punch over her shoulder, but misses, and feels me blow into her other ear. She swings again, and misses and I pop up in front of her face.*

GrrDraxin: Don’t forget my words, Moka. *dodges Moka's trademark Know Your Place kick with ease, and grabs her ancle and kicks her other leg out from under her then gently dropping her to the ground* "You are a hundred and fifty thousand years too young to even hope to defeat me. Even if you make it to that age, it still wouldn't help, at least not without proper training. Farewell, for now, I'll be watching." * I levitate off the ground and then fly off as a beam of light into space*

Moka :*she realises this guy could pose a threat to her with the ease she was taken down, but smiles* "This could get interesting...."

-------- Stalling the Imaginary Engine ---------



Unwanted Lectures

The scene is outside near the cliff by the bus stop, I'm meeting with Tsukune, and Moka and company. Moka had just kicked some guy's butt, and was about to seal herself up again, but I grabbed the rosary instead....

Moka: "What are you doing?"

GrrDraxin: "Why don't you kick your shoes off and stay awhile. I have many things to talk to you about."

Moka: *frowns* "I have nothing to speak to you about."

GrrDraxin: "That's fine, then just listen. From what I've observed, you're very strong, however, I've also seen that you're a one trick horse."

Moka: *looks upset*

GrrDraxin: "You rely almost entirely on your brute strength to win your fights, but I've seen very little, if at all, any tactics in your fighting style. which bring to mind a scenario that if you completely lost that strength, how would you fight then?"

Moka: *ponders a second and then goes to say something but gets cut off*

GrrDraxin: "Before you go and put your foot in your mouth, let me give you a possible scenario. We will use your friends here to illustrate my point. If you loose your strength, you can't deal as much damage as you could before. If in a one on one fight between you and any of these girls, Kurumu, Mizore, Yukari, Ruby, and Cocoa, fight it out under those conditions you may end up being at a disadvantage, especially if they fight dirty and exploit your weaknesses as a vampire. Even without water, they could go toe to toe with you with their abilities and even have a chance of winning against you."

Moka: *looks somewhat amused* "Please continue, I might learn a strategy here." *sarcastic*

GrrDraxin: "Once you hear the outcome, you might take that seriously. But continuing, if you were physically weak as a human, but say that your speed is only halved, because you need a bit of strength to overcome such factors as inertia and momentum on your own limbs to be as fast as you are normally. so the first match is versus Mizore, being that she doesn't need physical strength to battle, you could easily get trapped, stuck, squashed or skewered by her ice abilities. You might be able to dodge most of that, but not all of it. if you go to punch or kick her, you may end up hitting an ice wall instead, a counter-productive maneuver. So unless you can close the distance between you quickly and attack quickly before she has time to react, but otherwise your chances of a win are only 25%, and that's being generous."

Moka: *still looking confident*

GrrDraxin: "Kurumu would also be a difficult contender, as she would be able to slice you to ribbons if she got close enough. As with before, your one hit one kill tactic won't work as it would take several well placed hit to knock Kurumu out. Her advantages would be her flight and her claws. She'd be able to just swoop in and claw or impale you like a dive bomber, while you would have to try and dodge and hit her when she come near. But chances are that if she got in one good hit to your head or neck, you're history. I'd say your chances of winning are about 25 to 45%. only slightly better if she was being dumb with her attacks.

Moka eyes Kurumu contemptuously.

GrrDraxin: "Now with Yukari and Ruby, you have no idea what she may have up their sleeves, and I mean that literally. Your chances against them are a bit wider in scope depending on how they utilize their spells and if they have enough time to get a few off before you force them into hand to hand combat. of which then your chances of winning go up to about 50 to 75%. If you are not so lucky to get that opportunity, your chances are only 30 to 45%. it's even less if you're taking them both on at once. and of course, your chances dwindle even further if you try and take all of them on, in which you can expect a mere 1% if you're lucky."

Moka: *Smiles* "Lucky for me that I'm not weak like that then, isn't it?"

GrrDraxin: "Yes, but I'll give you the odds of a 1 on 1 with me under the circumstances right now. With your full power, your chances against me are......." *draws a 1 and a 0 in the air and closes a hand around them and then stretches it out like an accordion, except that instead of the numbers stretching, more numbers appear to fill the gaps so it now reads 0.000000000000000000001*.
"Which means that you virtually have no chance of winning against me at all."

Moka: *looks highly amused and begins to laugh* "Ha! you think you have THAT much of a chance do you? Don't underestimate me!"

GrrDraxin: "Oh? You think I'm kidding? Hey, Tsukune..... and you bunch." *calling the others nearer* "With your permission, I'd like a chance to make her eat her words. Don't worry about her or me being hurt, I'll go easy on her. If anything, she'll be more embarrassed than hurt.... well, she might have a bit of stinging in places, but nothing she cant get over in a day or two."

Tsukune: "Are you sure you won't hurt her? I wouldn't want her in the hospital again."

GrrDraxin: "No worries, she'd be lucky if she even got some scratches. I do not intend to draw blood or break any bones, and besides, I can heal her good as new if necessary."

Moka: *looks angry* "What are you asking their permission for? They need not be a part of this fight!"

GrrDraxin: "Okay okay, gees." *looks at Moka wit an evil grin and takes a stance a ways away from the others* "I'm going to mop the floor with ya." *cracking knuckles*

Moka: "If you think you can, just try it." *she closes the distance and performs her signature kick to the head* "Know your....*"
A loud single clap is heard and Moka takes a couple steps back holding the right side of her face.

Moka: "Wha...?"

GrrDraxin: "Place?" *I finish her line for her* "Seems that one took you by surprise. Did it hurt?"

Moka: "You.... you slapped me! How could you block my kick and slap me in one motion?!"

GrrDraxin: "I'm just lucky I guess. Wanna try again?"

Moka Doesn't say anything but gives a sour look and moves in to attack again. she tries doing it again, with no contact and receives another slap. She continues to attack but to no avail, each attack is countered with a slap to her face. Even rapid combos are met with counters of equal numbers and quickness, all of them are direct slaps to her face while all her attacks are either parried, blocked or dodged. many minutes later, it's become quite clear that this has become a one sided fight, and Moka is on the loosing end. Her cheeks are flushed a bright red due to all the impacts of the slaps and she looks pissed off and helplessly worn out.

GrrDraxin: "What's the matter? Are you giving up already? Surely this isn't the full extent of your power is it?"

Moka: "Why you...!" *she gets up and begins attacking again*

GrrDraxin: "That's the spirit! Unleash those hounds of hell, and give me everything you've got."

This time, Moka powers up fully and begins attacking from all sides in a blurry fury, while I block and parry, but not dodge. Several more minutes later, Moka is still attacking with various punches and kicks but it appears that they aren't doing any damage whatsoever, and she seems to be slowing down as her energy wanes. Tsukune and the other notice that as Moka attacks that I seem to not be counter-attacking at all, but just simply.... counting?
Finally Moka stops and is breathing heavily.

Moka: "Why....? Why aren't you attacking? I'm open for attack now aren't I?"

GrrDraxin: "Indeed you are, however, whether or not you're guarding your defenses won't do you much good. I was just counting the number of attacks you just unleashed so that I can pay you back in equal number and intensity for my offensive."

Moka: "...Eh?"

GrrDraxin: "Now, it's my turn." *pops neck some*
After a brief pause, I begin with and instant movement with a knee to Moka's gut.

GrrDraxin: "One."

Moka doubles over with my knee grinding away at her gut, and a pained expression dawns her facial expression. My second move, also done with unparalleled speed, is an elbow to her back, thus pinching her body between my elbow and knee. This all seen in slow-motion, anime style.

GrrDraxin: "Two down, 474 to go."

Saying this I wrap an arm around her torso and carry her over to a nearby rock sticking up out of the ground. Moka, being knocked senseless, is in a daze, and unable to do much. I wave my hand near the rock and then kick off the top revealing a nice flat, even polished surface. I sit down on the newly cut rock and wait for moka to come to. A minute passes and she does, and then she realizes she's now bent over my lap.

Moka: "Wha? What the? How...?"

GrrDraxin: "Ah, you're back. I was wondering how long it was going to take you to regain your senses. Looks like I didn't have to wait long, you recover surprisingly quick. But I'm sorry to say that the rest of my payback to you won't be nearly as flashy as those two first hits."

I grab both of her hands with my one that I'm holding her down with, and flip up her skirt to reveal her shapely buttocks, and then I grab her panties.

Moka: "Wha....? What do you think you're doing?!" *protesting while her face is flushing red*

GrrDraxin: "Well, it's no fun just beating you up or slapping you around, so I'm giving you a child's punishment, a good ol' fashion spanking."

Upon saying this, I pull her panties up into her butt crack giving her a wedgie. And as if I were a machine, I crank my arm and open my hand.

GrrDraxin: "And now we really begin...."

And then, like a old rattly moter, her bottom receives 474 spanks in rapid succession in a little over two minutes and 40 seconds. However, these were no ordinary spankings, as these carried an electrical charge to increase the pain factor by a full 100%. Fortunately for her, it was painful for just the first minute or so, then her brain began converting the signals of pain and started converting them into those of pleasure. This had more do with the proximity to another certain area that might have received more than a few accidental perimeter hits, thus causing the sensation reversal. Needless to say, she was as limp as a Wee Willy after having seen something very awful.

GrrDraxin: *whispering in her ear* "Know your place."

With that, I get up and carry Moka over my shoulder back to the others who are looking at me with horrified expressions, which get worse when they see Moka's expression as looking like someone who just spent the last few hours getting raped very hard.

GrrDraxin: "Well, judging by the outcome here, I do believe this may be her first major defeat, and then to be humiliated on top of that to get this reaction... or rather the lack of reaction, must mean I hit her where it did the most damage."

Kurumu: "She looks so pathetic now. That must have been as painful as it looked."

Mizore: "Agreed..... Very painful...."

GrrDraxin: "You'd be in the same shape if it were you. Though, I'm sure the mental trauma was much more devastating than the physical damage."

Tsukune: "Poor Moka. I never would have thought that this is what you meant when you asked permission to fight her. I wouldn't have allowed it if I knew this was going to be the outcome."

GrrDraxin: "Didn't I say that there's no need to worry? I did mention healing if it was necessary, right? Did you think I only meant physical wounds?"

All: "Eeeehh....?!"

GrrDraxin: "That's right, I can have her cleaned up and back to her old self in no time.... or by the next time she's transforms anyway." *places a hand on Moka's head and gestures with the other like a blessing* "Partial memory lock..... Done."

With this Moka goes completely unconscious. I bring out her rosary and place it back on her neck-chain sealing her up once again.

GrrDraxin: "There, that should do it. Her other half won't be affected, but you may notice a bit of a change of the aggressive one. I can't predict what she'll do, but I'm almost certain she'll be a bit more docile around me now, since now she knows she can't defeat me. The memory lock should cover up most of the damaging part of that experience. She'll be able to unlock it little by little as she becomes accustomed to that gap in her memory. Anyway, I'll leave her to you now, oh healer of hearts." *handing over Moka and winking at Tsukune, and I begin walking toward the dorms* "Ah, that was fun, I wonder what the fruit of my efforts will taste like."

-------------- End? -------------


A few weeks later. (After the spanking incident, Moka did return to being herself. However....)

Inner Moka had done something to piss me off again, and ended up receiving a curse.

Moka D.: "What? What is this?! What have you done to me?!!!

GrrDraxin: "Congratulations, you now have the Curse of Seven Nights. It's a curse specifically meant to humiliate and embarrass. Being that you have angered me yet again, you are the first to try it. For the next 7 days and nights, you are now... a bed sheet."

Pointing at a clothesline hanging white sheet, we see that Moka has been turned into a color print bed sheet. (think of those kinds that an anime character is printed on, like those hugging pillow cases) what's particularly funny and cool about that, is that the image on the sheet of Moka is fully animated as if it were a movie screen of sorts.

GrrDraxin: "To make the duration of this curse 7 days or less, is that you must be slept on by a male person for those 7 nights."

Moka D. cringes, and I point a thumb over to Tsukune.

GrrDraxin: "That is, so long as he spends about an hour laying on you, admiring your womanly beauty before actually falling asleep. To shorten the curse to less than 7 nights, is to have him sleep on you in the buff. That's right, he has to sleep on you naked to shorten it to 5 nights instead of 7. And what's even better, is that your clothing will change or be removed in accordance to what he's wearing.... or not. So you both can see each other naked for those 5 nights, should you choose that path. But do remember, you do have to gander at each other for at least an hour, or else it won't work.

Moka: No wayyyyyy..... *tears are falling like waterfalls*

GrrDraxin: Yes, I know I'm evil, but it's for your own good.
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A/N: A god, or god-like being can do just about anything they want. Especially one that's been around or existed for longer than twice the amount of time than humans have worn clothing, and had spent most of that time in places that would qualify as being Hell-like. You may refer to any part of the Doom series (except the movie) to get an idea of the kinds of environments that would entail. Oh, and lets not forget being cast into a couple of Super-massive galactic black wholes. Of which ended up being more of a mistake because that caused said galaxies to literally fly apart when those Super-massive galactic black wholes suddenly disappeared. So now said being can self-destruct and take out wherever he's at instantly by gravitational force.

Bad endings all the way around, but transdimensional movement can provide soooo many possibilities. But Tsukune stood by, because he was asked to.... Not that he could have stopped it........


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The battle Aura

For some time now many battles between Moka and I ensued, but neither of us would really seriously hurt each other. It was during the most resent fight that we seriously considered the reasons why. Even though we could do a lot of damage to our surroundings, that would change if we were physically grappling one another. Under that condition, our strengths seemed a lot less extreme. Though she could barely lift me, and I could lift her with relative ease, to other onlookers, our close quarter combat seemed to put us both on more even terms in the case of strength. When we were grappling, my favorite move to put her in was to fling her around my back with one arm around her upper torso and then grab hold of her lower torso, and then pull both my arms forward as if trying to wrap her around my waist like a belt. For her, it's like being folded backward over the back of a couch or chair. Though it does put stress on her body, there isn't enough strength applied to break anything, except for the occasional spinal popping sound from the both of us.

But this time it's different. It had dawned on me that our fights weren't as spectacular as they should be. Just before Moka got into position to try and flip me, I stopped her.

Me: "Hey, I just noticed something, don't you think it's strange that when we fight in close quarters like this, that we don't destroy nearly as much of our surroundings than if we were fighting from a distance?"

Moka: "So? What of it?"

Me: "I mean that our distance seems to be linked to how much damage we do. You seem to be able to barely lift me, much less throw me. And even though I can man-handle you with a bit more ease, I can't seem to throw you as far as I've thrown others unassisted. (meaning by using another ability)

Moka considered this a moment. "So you think that something is tipping the scale in some way that's linked to how close we are?"

me: "Let's find out." I say as I take out a monocle and look through it while waving my hand around near myself and Moka. "Hmmm. Just as I thought. A canceling effect is occurring. You once said that your ability is to convert your aura into strength without utilizing muscle strength, right?"

Moka: "...... yeah. And....?" Moka is looking puzzled.

me: I too use my aura for strength, but mine is the opposite...... uh.... polarity than your's. But it's strange, normally that would increase the power differential exponentially, but in our case, it's causing a null point, where they no longer have an effect. Basically, we've been reduced to using our true physical strength against each other. Here, take a look."

I hand her the monocle, and she looks through it as well. She looks astounded at first, she flips the monocle over, looks at different things, she's tripped out with what she sees. Her aura is a reddish purple while mine is a blueish white, and the ambient energy around the place is a variety of colors, mostly dark in color though. She also notices strands of dark energy flowing into my backside then disappear into a much brighter blueish aura fog looming around my back.

Moka: "W-what is this? It looks like you are absorbing the ambient energy into that bright area on your back."

me: "Hmm? Oh that. That's my energy reversal power plant.... sort of. It lets me analyze my surroundings, but also purifies my own energy. As some of my abilities need positive energy to work properly. That area allows me to absorb negative energy and reverse it's alignment to become positive using special circle magic. Or, that's what I'm told. Even to this day, I still don't know how I got it, and frankly, I'm not very eager to find out, too many bad memories during that time I'd rather not relive."

Moka: "Wow, you do have a lot of tricks in your hat."

me: "Check this though."

I take her hand and direct her to look. She does and gets wide eyed at what's happening. The auras have actually thinned out and are compacted around our hands but most of it has pulled away as if a null wall was place where contact is being made, and an aura breeze seems to be blowing our auras down our arms to the point of contact as if attracted like liquid magnets. The null point is more of a greenish color but is very thin near the contact point. There is no energy at the place of contact, no energy interaction of any kind. we separate and she waves her hand around watching the flows. Very strange behavior of energy.

Me: "well, it looks like you'll have to learn a few tricks of your own to take me on effectively, cuz as it is right now, compared to me, you are still as weak as a baby fart. I don't necessarily need to use my aura directly against you to defeat you, but I don't want to kill you either, you're too much fun to play with, especially when you get frustrated."

Moka takes the monocle from her eye and looks at me with a slightly perturbed expression. "You mean to say that in all of our fights, you were only playing with me? Struggles that I thought were life and death was merely a game to you?"

I smile. "And THAT is how you gauge one's power level. Yes, I was playing, because I know that even under the most ideal conditions for you, you still wouldn't be able to defeat me. Now, you might be able to frustrate me a little, mostly because of your attitude, but a quick slam attack on you relieves that frustration. Even though this little discovery is interesting, it doesn't provide any advantage to you. Plus, I have an unlimited arsenal of tactics and attacks at my disposal. But if you cross the wrong line, I can make you suffer for all eternity. And my deeds haven't gone unnoticed, a friend told me once that he saw a plaque on a wall in hell that had my image on it with the caption "Employee of the Century". I guess I took many lives that time."


Moka stands there in disbelief. "........ You're joking, right?"

I bend closer and pull my right bottom eyelid down. "Do these eyes lie?" I say as my irises morph into ones that look like inner Moka's, and I smile.

Moka hits me in the head with the monocle. I laugh as she turn and walks away, and puts her rosary back on.

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Torture of Boredom

During another one of our spats me and inner Moka had, I had managed to get a hold on both of her hands wrapped around herself and mine holding her in position. It almost looked like a lovers embrace..... except that she was being quite noisy about how embarrassing that hold was. She tried many times to head-butt me with the back of her head, but I simply moved my head so that it looked like I was biting her on the neck. And then she finally got tired and decided to try and pile-drive the both of our heads into the ground by jumping and flipping in mid-air. It worked, but then again, it didn't. We just stood on out heads with our feet in the air, and I still had a firm grip on her hands so she couldn't do anything with them.

Me: "That was real smart. You must really like standing on your head to wanna do that stunt." I said sarcastically.
Moka: "Well we wouldn't be making fools of ourselves if you'd just let go of me."
Me: "Excuse me, but you're the one that's being the fool, I'm used to this sort of thing. Plus your skirt is not defying gravity very well. If you have any sense of feminine modesty, you'd realize that showing your undergarments to even a small audience is quite embarrassing in and of itself. ....... But pink cotton panties suits you quite well though."
Moka: "Aaaarrrgghh! Let me go!!" She yells as she tries to squirm out on my grip, but to no avail.
Me: "Nope."
Moka: "Let me go now!!"
Me: "Uhm.... no."
Moka: "Release me!!"

Moka just continues to repeating her demand of releasing her, to which I reply in many different ways that I won't. Such as: Nope, no way, uh-uh, no can do, not gonna happen, etc. etc. All the while we are still standing on our heads, until eventually she 'cuts the cheese' rather unexpectedly.

Of course, this was an induced bit of flatulence, being that I could do such a thing without her knowing that I gave her the farts. And it smelled too, kinda like a hot bean burrito fart, an she noticed right away. Moka began to turn a beet red, as if she wasn't red enough with her blood already in her head, this just put more of it into her cheeks and ears. However, she discharged another one, but a little stronger this time, and it was enough to push us off balance.

Me: 'Oh. Uhm, timmmmmberrrrrr." I say as we began to lean forward like the Leaning Tower of Pisa.
Moka: "Eh...? Whoaaaa!"

As it turned out, it was her head that was the pivot point and her "rear thruster" was strong enough to push us both forward, again induced by me, and we fell. With me on top of her now, I was in an ideal position, because I knew how much being on the bottom annoyed her.

Me: "I think I underestimated you a bit, Moka. You ARE strong."
Moka: "Thanks, now get off me."
Me: "I don't know why you're thanking me on commenting on the strength of your flatulence, if I didn't turn off my sense of smell, I could have died. And no, I will not get off of you."
Moka: "Huh? Why you.... Get offa me! Let me go this instant!!"
Me: "And give up my advantage? Never."

And so Moka goes into yet another fit of yelling and screaming and struggling, but to no avail. The others can't intervene either, because a barrier stands in their way so all they can do is watch. They can see and hear everything, we can see them, but, we can't hear them though. While I'm simply responding with constant refusals to Moka's demands in more creative ways, like using foreign languages and such to basically say NO. This lasts for another 20 minutes or so, and then she calms down, but is still keeping up her demanding. After about 2 hours, she's still trying to demand her release, but here I am, fast asleep, but still responding in refusal and still have a death grip on her. She figured out long ago that struggling didn't work at all, and it seemed that when she started asking to be released instead of demanding, the refusal responses became more like "maybe later, not now, not yet". then she got fed up and tried to demand and then came a rather unique response....

Me: "Back to square one, and you were so close too. Too bad."
Moka: "Huh? You were going to release me? Really?"
Me: "Was..... But you screwed up. And here I was thinking that you with your so-called superior intellect would figure it out by now, but I guess I was wrong......" I said half asleep. I then laid my head down again.
Moka: "Uugu........" she lets out before banging her head into the ground.
Me: "You know, you kinda make a nice bed. It's too bad that I have to settle for your backside though, I bet your front is a bit softer....but for various reasons I can't do that....." I say falling back into slumber, but still able to respond to her requests or demands with more refusals.

After a long time of silence and the occasional request/demand and subsequent refusal, Moka tried something that only someone desperate would try.

Moka: "..... I..... I love you......"
Stirred out of sleep by those unusual words, I open my eyes and lift my head with a slightly puzzled look, then I smile. "Now, that's more like it. But I don't sense any sincerity at all. So, no, I will not release you."
Moka: "Awwww, come on! What more do you want from me, Huh?!"
Me: "You want me to release you. But are you going to be nice about it? I already know the answer is no. So, I will NOT release you. Are you really that dumb to not figure it out?"
Moka: "Damn you...." She cursed in futility.
Me: "Hmm, there's no sincerity in those words either..... " I say while laying my head down again.
Moka: "Fine.... I'd rather kill myself eating dirt than to say anything nice to you."
Me: "Well, if you want to degrade yourself to being on par with the likes of worms, be my guest. But just remember this: as long as I have you right where I want you like this, you cannot die, no matter what's done to you."

Meanwhile, the board chairman and bus driver joined Tsukune and company in watching me torment Moka.

Bus Driver: "Heh heh heh, that boy really is ruthless.

Tsukune and the girls: "Bus driver-san, board chairman, you got to help her, they've been like that for hours! Drax might hurt Moka!

Board Chairman: "He won't hurt her, but he'll make sure she remembers this experience. But even if he was going to hurt her, we couldn't do anything about it anyway, he's far more powerful than he lets on. And there isn't a seal or lock in existence that could contain him. However, he is able to seal himself up, which he has done to quite some extent. But even then, he still out-classes even the highest of Yokai."

Bus Driver: "Heh heh, his situation is unique indeed. You could say he muscled his way in to this academy. Being that he can't really leave the grand barrier on his own, though he's tried, some force other than the barrier is keeping him here, and we don't know why.

Board Chairman: "Miss Akashia seems to be the closest thing he has to a sister, if you look at how he picks on her. It's almost the same to how an older brother would treat his little sister when she's being a snot-nosed, disrespectful brat. I guess when you consider vampire society, this might be right on the mark of how a big brother would treat her if she mouthed off to him."

Bus Driver: "In any case, we'll have to watch this one play itself out."

36 hours later, Moka finally made a sincere, polite, teary eyed request to be let go. She no longer had any energy left to struggle anymore, and she finally swallowed her pride long enough to admit defeat. Upon her release, she was handed over to Tsukune, who took her back to her room to rest. He explained to her about what the Board Chairman and Bus Driver said, and she said that she had been painfully aware that she was out-matched. She changed her clothes, put the rosary on and went to bed.... for 3 days. But she was back and ready for the week on Monday.

End



The Ultimate Negativity

Moka and I were engaged in a stare-down contest to see who blinked first,
whoever blinked got a punishment, that is IF you got close enough to dispense
it while your opponent is in the process of blinking. 3 times and you lose.
Tsukune and the rest of the girls were watching, as I had made it a peaceful
challenge with only someone buying lunch as the prize. The contest had been
going on for 5 minutes on the school roof, with no changes so far.

Not long after, there was a odd sounding thunderclap, and for the audience
time was slowed down. But for the people involved, what was about to
happen.... happened in an instant. Without taking my eyes off Moka, I raised my
right arm and powered up an energy shot at the same time. When my arm and
hand was in the correct position I shot a powerful plasma bolt off into the sky,
which impacted on the cause of the thunderclap, another energy bold which was hurling in my direction.

The two energy shots exploded like a fireworks display. But I fired off a whole
volley of plasma shots in very rapid succession, so rapid that to an untrained
eye, would seem like it was a single spread shot. Each shot was aimed at each
of the fragments from the previous shot's collision, which all hit their marks and
exploded the fragments, but it just caused more fragments to rain down upon
me. Like little guided missiles, the now even smaller energy fragments turned
their course and hit and stuck to me like little glowing mud spatters.

Even then, I didn't take my eyes off Moka, who hasn't even had time to react to
the situation. But as arrogant as it may sound, there are very few things that can hurt me..... What was about to happen really really hurt.

The flow of time returned to normal for the audience, and those involved now
got some time to react. Moka's expression changed from her usual cold stare
to a much less intense "WTF" look as she saw me covered in little glowing dots
all of the sudden. My visible reaction was by saying "Oh crap." And everybody
else managed to get out a "Huh?" before we were all blown away.

It started when the fragments began electrocuting me, and I yelled out in pain.
Then from a wide angle view of the school, I am blown up. Moka is thrown
across the roof to the other side, but manages not to fall off. Tsukune and the
rest aren't so lucky, as they're blown off in the opposite direction. But
fortunately for them, it was only a concussion blast and the ones able to fly were able to catch those who couldn't from falling to the ground.

From the wide view again we see massive lightning bolts crawling all over the
school building from that part of the roof on their way to the ground. Once the
smoke begins to clear, we see the school roof is still intact, but what begins to
rise from the roof might change that.....

When Moka gets back on her feet and tries to peer though the clearing smoke, all she can see in front of her is pure darkness. This is however not because she's gone blind, because she looks behind her to see the rest of the school scenery in that direction, but when she turns back, it's nothing but black.

Once most of the smoke cleared Moka could better make out why she couldn't see that way. She felt as if she was looking into a great void.... this is, until the "void" moved back. Then the truth of what she was looking at became horrifyingly clear.

A creature rising up from the roof was there, completely black, and starting to stand up, reaching a height as tall as the tallest building on campus was standing up. A very low sounding rumble started to rise and then an ear piercing screech along with the now loud rumble resounded throughout the school and surrounding areas that could have even reached other realms, including the human world. A sound so powerful, it pierced the ears and rumbled your gut, and Moka got the worst of it, and it gave her a headache.

This thing was big, loud, scary, and above all...... very pissed off. Once it reached full height, it opened what could have been called eyes by where they were placed, but those "eyes" emitted a red glow so powerful, that Moka could feel an intense heat bombarding her body, and her clothes began to disintegrate before her very eyes. Realizing being there was getting dangerous, Moka retreated by jumping off the roof to the ground. Tsukune, Kurumu, Mizore, Ruby and Yukari were already on the ground safely, but were also taking cover from the intense heat rays. Kurumu commented that Moka had just escaped and was on the other side of the court yard.

"Wh-what is that thing?!" Tsukune asked as he was wiping the sweat off his forehead. "I... I don't know. But I think it's very angry." Kurumu said clinging to Tsukune's arm. "Heh heh heh. I knew that boy was special." A voice nearby said. Tsukune and the rest notice the bus driver leaning against a nearby tree thats beginning to smolder from the intense heat and he's even using it to light his cigar. "Bus Driver-san?!" everyone exclaimed all at once.

"Sir, do you know what that creature is?" Ruby worriedly asked. "If I'm not mistaken, that creature is a.... no, THE Void-Walker of legend. According to some seers, it terrorizes one of the realms of hell in such a way that even the most resistant of demons flees in fear of it. To think that I'm in such close proximity to one.... heh heh heh." The bus driver explains calmly but with a hint of excitement.

Suddenly the intense heat stops and another screeching roar is heard. Everyone takes a peek to see the creature turning it's intense gaze towards the sky, or rather at what is in the sky...... It's a swirling mass of energy around what could be described as a wormhole or portal of some sort. The Void Walker then bends down and then the sound of the school building's structure being severely stressed can be heard followed by the creature jumping off the building and into the portal.

After a few seconds, the portal destabilizes and then explodes in a ring-like manor cutting a rather narrow path of destruction across the school grounds, but no major buildings were hit, just a bunch of trees a tool shed and a couple of gazebos.

And so, for 3 whole weeks I was declared dead by the school staff and students. Tsukune and the rest of the newspaper club were just shocked about what they had witnessed, and had just put out the latest school newspaper detailing the event, though holding to something similar in meaning to "Missing" rather than dead, but not in so few words.Then, someone that nobody expected to ever see again showed up to class on the forth week......

Looking like something the cat dragged in, was none other than myself, pale and worn out. I sat down in my assigned seat and flopped my head down onto it. Everyone was in awe that I had returned, many of whom saw what happened from a distance. They just stood/sat there staring. Nekonome-sensei was the first to recover. "W-well, nice to have you back, Dennis-san." she stammered. "It's good to be back...." I spoke without lifting my head. "Now lets get on with it, I've had a very rough time, and need to rest."

"Uh, shouldn't you have stayed in your room or gone to infirmary instead of coming to class in that condition?" Nekonome asked worriedly. I managed to sit up to that, "What, and miss all the excitement that I'm sure many of you people are sure to raise? Never. Besides, the rumors of my demise are completely over exaggerated." I said waving the newspaper with that particular article. "Even if I'm still tired from.... er... dying. I'll live..... I'll just be a zombie for a couple of days." I said trying my best to smile.

And so, the crowd cheered, the band played, and life had gotten just a bit more interesting.

End


Posts of ideas, devices, jokes and Annaliese

---------- Post #1 ----------

The Water Rosary

It is a rosary that looks almost exactly like Moka's normal rosary, except that it's less than half the size, and the jewel is light blue. It offers the wearer 15 continuous hours of protection from water in 5, 3 hour charges. However, it requires 12 hours for each charge to be replenished during "dry" time. The wearer must be wearing the rosary in order to charge and use it, as it uses the wearer's own aura energy to charge with.

The protection is offered by using the wearer's flesh as the means to prevent energy loss or "shorting" during water exposure by suppressing the user's aura below the skin surface, allowing the body to protect the energy within. However, if the wearer is injured and has open wounds, the protection around the wound will be severely diminished. Thus, like any other wound, will make the user vulnerable to water in that area.

The total time required to fully charge the rosary is 60 hours. This can be continuous or intermittent. However one needs to be aware that once a charge is activated it will remain active for the full 3 hours. There is no way to cancel or turn it off. Once a charge is depleted, the rosary will go into it's recharge state until full. The wearer can check the status of charge of the rosary by gently tapping the gem of the rosary, it will then change color to indicate level of charge, and current state.

If the rosary gem turns black, it means the rosary is empty and needs time to charge. If the gem is red, it has 1 charge, violet is 2 charges, blue is 3, yellow is 4 and green is 5 full charges. To indicate state, the gem will brighten the charge state color to nearly white at regular intervals to indicate if it's actively charging. If it's just a steady green, then it is in standby mode with full charge.

(((((A/N: a snippet on Tsukune appreciating Moka having such an item)))))))

I'm sure Moka would be too, except that I'd taunt her with it first, using a curse of bad karma concerning water (of which she wouldn't know about). Very much like Ranma's ability to have water thrown on him seemingly everywhere he goes, resulting in him turning into a girl quite often.

Moka might think she's just having a bad day. Then I come along with my "invention". Taking pity on her, I lend her a one-time-use prototype to see how she fairs with it. That might be how I'd have it go.....

----- Post #2 ----------

Ah, as a Demon Hunter myself, I know how easy it is to fall into that trap of a mindset.


But I've got a few toys to help properly judge whether that demon is truly bad or if it's just doing it's job without any malice at all. It's called a Time Tracer.
---- Tool Description ----
Using a 2D representation of the subjects timeline, I can trace everything they've said, done, and other beings they've encountered, either directly or indirectly. To me it's like spectating in 3rd person mode in a 3D game, except that you can rewind to any part of that subject's life up to the present. It's quite handy for crime investigation, because not only can you trace from the subject that you start from, but anyone/anything else that subject has met or seen. These are called timeline hops, and you can use this to track someone else, even if that person has blasted themselves into deep space to escape capture. But you can only hop up to 2 timelines away from the subject that you would be currently probing. The resolution degrades rapidly after that. Any good time detective would have something like this, but unfortunately, none do.

----- End Transmission ----

-------- Post #3 ----------

I think if I were in that situation(harem), I'd wish for only 1 ability: Duplication.

"You see one, now there's two."
"Oh, you think you can handle two?"
"Well then, there are now eight of me."
"Have fun ladies. Don't forget to replenish your fluids."
------- Post #4 ----------

Oh oh! I just thought of a good way to keep Dark Moka restrained! Tie her and Tsukune together! But in such a way that if she uses her freakish strength, it could rip Tsukune apart. Think about it, if they were tied back to back (back to front, front to back, or front to front) spread-eagle, and their limbs tied together individually right down to their fingers, neither could move well, if even at all. Well, at least their upper bodies, Tsukune ( I ) would LOVE to have her pressing her breasts against me....... *DROOL*

But to be a fool, I would like to be a victim of the "Magical Magnet" strait to her breasts...... *DROOOOOOOOOOL* Even though I try to get away by trying to push her away, I can't get unstuck. She can feel my strength being put against her to separate us, almost to the point that her sternum would break. Imagine picking up Moka with your face alone. She asks who I am. I say: "I am Lord GrrDraxin, master of the Million Limbos."

--------- Post #5 ----------

I for one DO like the anime. And I will admit to liking it for the fanservice, of which I'm in to.

Come'on Moka, flip that skirt again.
Moka: *Whack!* Know your place!
I do know my place..... and it's groping these.
Moka: Kyaa! *Wham!* Stop grabbing my breasts!!
Ooooh, hit me again bebe. You should try this Tsukune. They're soft yet firm.
Tsukune: I'd rather not.
Okay, your loss. *Grope*
Moka: Ah! *swing! swing! whoosh!*
Hah! You couldn't hit the broad side of a super tanker.
Moka : Grrrrrrr!!!!

------------ Post #6 ----------

Announcer: Today ladies and gentlemen, we are holding the Arthur Legend Oomie. Just as King Arthur had to pull a sword from the stone to become king, The first man to pull the rosary off miss Moka Akashiya's neck, without damage, will be her future husband.

Moka: Damn you, mother...... Doing useless things again.........

Kokoa: Any takers will have to defeat me first! I'm not giving Onne-chan to any of you scum!

------------ Post #7 ----------

Youkai, Human Relations - Arguments that Youkai are a type of human

What IS that factor you might ask? Well, to answer this, we look to Tsukune. What IS Tsukune? He's human as it has been stated from the beginning, But how do the girls relate to that?

Let's look this way; All the girls are perfect for Tsukune because even transformed, they still look mostly like their human forms.

Moka: Transformation changes her hair to silver, her eyes change from hazel to red and changes to slit-type pupils, with strength multiplier via energy aura manipulation.

Kurumu: Transformation adds 3 new appendages. A tail, and wings that are capable of flight, and sharp extendable fingernails, and added strength and speed.

Mizore: Full transformation only yields a change in her hair to being ice covered. All powers available in human form. Her ice manipulation could be considered near limitless as it is only her imagination that limits how she uses them.

As such the above 3 have natural transformation capability. Yukari and Ruby are basically human except for their magic, which like science, has to be taught by a master, or learned by reading/studying or researching via trial and error.

When thinking, I took into consideration that they all could successfully breed with Tsukune and bear his offspring. Which in turn means that genetically, they are all compatible. If someone were to analyze their DNA, they may come to the conclusion that Yokai are just another possible evolutionary path that humans could have taken.

This would just put Yokai in the same league as the mutants in X-Men, except that powers are inherited and not random, and that bloodlines can be strengthened by breeding with those with like abilities.

When one adds in things like tastes and weaknesses, one begins to see why each type of Yokai does what they do around humans. The 2 obvious subjects are Kurumu and Moka. This will be centered mostly around mating rituals.

Kurumu, being a succubus, in order to perpetuate her race must seduce as many men as possible to find her "Destined One". But despite the promiscuous of such a practice, the birthrate of succubus seems to be dismally low. Now why is that? Well, I don't know, but I look forward to finding out.

In Kurumu's particular case, she has something that I assume no other succubus would still have at her age, and 3 words that would be unlikely to find in the same sentence. Kurumu, despite being a succubus, is still a virgin, and still innocent to a point. So that last sentence has those 3 unlikely words that you wouldn't think of being together when one thinks about how a succubus is.

Moka's case is just as simple. Though her habits as a vampire are peculiar from a human perspective, nature has worked her magic into Moka as well. Vampires are very few, but why would they have an attraction to humans? I think that from a vampire's point of view, the only redeeming quality about humans is the nice taste of their blood. But this could also be nature's way of trying to get vampires to breed with humans as well, to try and pull the vampire race back into the main human gene pool.

This does seem to be the most logical route, because humans outnumber vampires and other Yokai many times over. It makes sense for nature to try and pull all the other splinter races of the Yokai back in to rejoin the main successful human gene pool.

As we see in the story so far that some races breed inter-racially, which still yields beings of high powers, but they start to drift further away from their origin race AND humans, which goes to show that their races are unsuccessful and will start to go extinct. Vampires look like they might be the first to go if they keep up their solitary ways.

So, you're opinions are welcome and if you wish to state your thoughts on those, please specify by spoiler tag number or title so I know which ones are being referred to and are best suited for elaboration. I may take some of these and actually build a story around it to fill in the blanks or leave it as is, I'm not sure.

[LordRichardWellington]

Despite being interrupted multiple times and having to read your post over a period of several hours, it was very funny. The last bit unknown brings up a very good point about genetics. But the more I think about it, and here is a reference to Darwin, wouldn't natural selection make them, the youkai, the more dominate/ preferable choice?

Because animals, and despite all our knowledge and wisdom humans too, tend to choose the most powerful and predominant creature to mate with. But there is also the natural fact about species, humans breed with other humans because they are attracted to one another, so just why would female of another species want, other than to strengthen their clan, to breed with another species? Unless of course this goes down to the sheer fact that sentient beings are attracted to other sentient beings regardless.

[weview]

Okay, someone critique this so I can decide to put it up on fanfiction.net or not. Note that the story isn't finished yet.

I enjoyed the story, but it seems like a bit of a rewrite of the opening of the first episode. Still, you have a very descriptive and interesting writing style (better than most of what I see on Fanfiction.net). I'd definitely put it up, but maybe add in more detail as to Tsukune getting up so as to stretch it out. Normally 1000-2000 words is good for an opening chapter. :)

[GrrDraxin]

Despite being interrupted multiple times and having to read your post over a period of several hours, it was very funny. The last bit unknown brings up a very good point about genetics. But the more I think about it, and here is a reference to Darwin, wouldn't natural selection make them, the youkai, the more dominate/ preferable choice?

Because animals, and despite all our knowledge and wisdom humans too, tend to choose the most powerful and predominant creature to mate with. But there is also the natural fact about species, humans breed with other humans because they are attracted to one another, so just why would female of another species want, other than to strengthen their clan, to breed with another species? Unless of course this goes down to the sheer fact that sentient beings are attracted to other sentient beings regardless.
Very true, and yet there is also issues with longevity. It seems that most of the other races live as long if not slightly longer than humans, and even vampires may be vulnerable to aging, even if they're said to be immortal.

The immortal part might not be entirely true, but not too far fetched to live a couple hundred years but not too much longer or shorter (due to other possible factors). After all, why breed if your race lives forever or at least for thousands of years?

[weview]

I'm pretty sure this borders on zoophilia lol

[GrrDraxin]

Well, just to pick up this thread from it's deadness, would anyone mind posting links to fanfictions that others have written(even if it's not one of us) and list them for recommendations if you liked them? Of course I'd link ones I personally like as well. the stories can reside anywhere, like FanFiction.net or the like.

I've recently came across a fiction that in my opinion COULD fit in with the canon material if it wasn't fan written. The characters were spot-on and the story itself is very well written. Its called "Here In My Arms" on FF.net. It's well worth a read, and my current favorite.

If you wish, you may consider this post as an extension of my post in the general discussion thread for the lack of good story in the anime. If those writers were smart they would have adapted a well written fanfiction into the anime screen play.

[weview]

I have one that I am currently reading and really enjoying. Its such an interesting idea. What if Outer Moka didn't exist?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5244605/1/The_Unsealed_Vampire

I'm finding it very difficult to be creative with my second story. I think I have the plot decided but hard to get chapters out. Its called Dark Wish. Any suggestions with what I can do with it?

[GrrDraxin]

Ah yes, I know that story, and it has a much darker feel to it too. Even Tsukune has killed and so has Mizore, and Moka just slaughters the opponents. Only Kurumu and Yukari have yet to get a frag.

The other high ranking stories I follow are:
Here_In_My_Arms (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5235165/1/Here_In_My_Arms)
Transfusion (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5264965/1/Transfusion)
The_Bet (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5377013/1/The_Bet)
To_be_the_Servant (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5285281/1/To_be_the_Servant)
The_Mighty_Vampire_Aono (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4973495/1/The_Mighty_Vampire_Aono)
Rosario_Vampire_Blood_Flow (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4649686/1/Rosario_Vampire_Blood_Flow)
Kapuchuu_to_Vampire (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5136454/1/Kapuchuu_to_Vampire)<DEAD>
Kapuchuu_Ga_Hoshii_No (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5357559/1/Kapuchuu_Ga_Hoshii_No)<DEAD>
Anata_ni_Kapuchuu (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5207605/1/Anata_ni_Kapuchuu) <DEAD>
Youkai_to_Vampire (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5195697/1/Youkai_to_Vampire)<DEAD>
Amity_to_Vampire_Kitsune_no_Yomeiri (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5227748/1/Amity_to_Vampire_Kitsune_no_Yomeiri)<DEAD>
Amity_to_Vampire_Awaken_Your_Ability (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5005118/1/Amity_to_Vampire_Awaken_Your_Ability)<DEAD>
Amity_to_Vampire (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4852031/1/Amity_to_Vampire)<DEAD>
CrossVampire_Amalgamation (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5267323/1/CrossVampire_Amalgamation)<DEAD>
CrossVampire_Unity (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5136208/1/CrossVampire_Unity)<DEAD>
CrossVampire_Vindication (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5057384/1/CrossVampire_Vindication)<DEAD>
CrossVampire_Temptation (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4915348/1/CrossVampire_Temptation)<DEAD>
CrossVampire_My_Silver_Bullet (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4858452/1/CrossVampire_My_Silver_Bullet)<DEAD>
CrossVampire (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4758869/1/CrossVampire)<DEAD>
Kyoukos_Twenty_Adventures (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4848666/1/Kyoukos_Twenty_Adventures)<DEAD>
RosarioVampire_Meet_Mokas_Parents (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4617887/1/RosarioVampire_Meet_Mokas_Parents)
Returns_and_Revelations (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4854725/1/Returns_and_Revelations)
Rosairo_To_Vampire_Calling_and_desires (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4862685/1/Rosairo_To_Vampire_Calling_and_desires)
What_has_never_been (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4855290/1/What_has_never_been)
What_Love_Takes (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5033898/3/What_Love_Takes)
How_far_Ive_come (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5073246/1/How_far_Ive_come)
Only_Time_will_tell (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5163085/1/Only_Time_will_tell)
Hidden_Truths_of_Tsukune (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5209398/1/Hidden_Truths_of_Tsukune)
RosarioVampire_A_Date_and_a_Vampire (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4871707/1/RosarioVampire_A_Date_and_a_Vampire)
RosarioVampire_What_you_see_might_not_be_real (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5165131/1/RosarioVampire_What_you_see_might_not_be_real)
Mokas_Eldest_Sister (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945513/1/Mokas_Eldest_Sister)
what_if (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5163276/3/what_if)
Revenge_to_Vampire (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5056556/2/Revenge_to_Vampire)
Scare_Tactics (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4725828/1/Scare_Tactics)

These are ones I've read and liked, any similarities to your lists?

Updated for better formatting.

[weview]

I seem to be starting new stories while I'm stuck with Dark Wish. I'm kind of just realising all the possibilities that can be used and that will still leave some of the original story intact.

[GrrDraxin]

Always write 3 chapters ahead, unless you want to be influenced by user reviews.

[weview]

Good point. Finding it hard to be creative though. I have bits and pieces but no general order to them. Its easier to write for the romance than the action.

[Tycho]

Guess what; it's ADVERTISEMENT TIME!

I, King Tycho, he who's power the Gods envy, do hereby command you to read, and subsequently review, my masterpiece-of-shit fan-fiction (is it a masterpiece or a piece of shit!? That's for YOU to decide!). It's known by the name 'Transfusion', and may be found here (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5264965/1/Transfusion).

I hope you like it. Actually, no I don't, since I do not know you, the reader, on a personal level and therefore do not give a shit about you in the least. Still, read the fan-faction.

As a special offer, if I get 500,000 reviews by Sunday, I'll adopt an African orphan and name him "Finger-Bang"! Happy reading!

~Tycho, Machinated Mercenary

[GrrDraxin]

Sorry to say Tyk, that's not really a good way to advertise. Of course you already know me from my previous reviews of your fic. The "do not give a shit about you in the least" part could have been left out in regards to proper etiquette of both this forum and in conducting your advertisement.

The main purpose of this thread is to preview and/or discuss various fics of whatever origin, so long as they have something to do with R+V. You may also note that I've already linked your fic in a previous post based on my list of favorites on FF. So there is no need to quite further plug for it.

[Znail]

Its a bit extra stupid to be rude when its actualy a lie as you obviously care enuff about everyones oppinion to post here in the first place asking for reviews.

[Tycho]

Okay, where to start...

First off, GrrDraxin, I didn't see your previous link to my fic, sorry. That said...are you...reviewing my plug? Whatever. Oh, and I apologize about the language, but you know by now how I think. (the forums would have language filters if it was a huge issue)

Znail, the only reason I write fan fiction is to have a creative outlet. I publish it, and ask for reviews in order to help better my future work, thus expanding my creative skill for where I really use it: game programming and writing music. Trust me, it makes sense in my head.

That said, I really don't care about people I don't know personally, and, much like our good friend Znail, I am enough of an asshole to announce it publicly and not care less. I knew that the majority of people reading the posts on this forum would most likely be interested in reading my fan fiction (again, this was without previous knowledge that GrrDraxin had kindly posted it beforehand), and therefore decided to take the opportunity to get more views. The end.

And in anticipation of the next critique of this very post: learn to take a joke, dude.

[weview]

Before an argument breaks out, lets move it swiftly along...

Was anyone reading The Unsealed Vampire?

I don't know which ending I prefer (there are two). Both don't really portray Mizore in a good way and the darker one only really determines what happens to her.

[GrrDraxin]

Before an argument breaks out, lets move it swiftly along...

Was anyone reading The Unsealed Vampire?

I don't know which ending I prefer (there are two). Both don't really portray Mizore in a good way and the darker one only really determines what happens to her.

I preferred the second ending, but the first one made sense logically when taking into account the previous events. One's the happy end, and the other is the bad end based on karma. But that's the breaks when you mess around, or get involved with a potential yandere.

[weview]

I'm a sucker for happy endings and it was actually a smarter way to wrap it up. I didn't see it coming to be honest. Moka goes to a human school instead.

However, the darker ending is more dramatic and I'm happy to see Mizore get what she wants (in a weird way) although he'll never really accept what happens.

Do you agree it seemed like an unplanned and rushed ending?

[GrrDraxin]

It did. As I noted in my review of it.

[weview]

Such a shame. It was a good fic and they'd spent a long time building it up to this moment

[GrrDraxin]

Well, you know as they say sh*t happens. I was hoping that it would get further resolved with 30 or more chapters, but as I said above...

[weview]

Not a good thing when you become involved in the story. Makes the characters just die out and normally in these fics different personalities are established for each as oppose to making them stock characters. No pretty artwork can be used so you have to get into their heads to understand whats happening

[Yellowdorkfish]

Was anyone reading The Unsealed Vampire?

I don't know which ending I prefer (there are two). Both don't really portray Mizore in a good way and the darker one only really determines what happens to her.[/QUOTE]

I am sucker for happy endings. Especially for TsuXMoka endings.

[TigersDemon]

I agree entierly :D

[weview]

Go back a page. We were discussing it

[Yellowdorkfish]

found a sequel to "The Unsealed Vampire"
Its plot is pretty good though the first few chapters feel kinda rushed. here is a link.
(srry if one was posted earlier)


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5470436/1/Unsealed_Vampire_II_Tsukune_Lord_of_Arcania


Oh, and i prefer the 2nd ending for "The Unsealed Vampire"

[GrrDraxin]

Meh, it just doesn't seem as good when it's not LotLoF(lord of the land of fire) writing it.

[Yellowdorkfish]

Yah, lord of the land of fire is a good writer, but i try to keep an open mind for others. The idea of the new series seems interesting at the very least.

[weview]

I'm a bit confused about some other stories he has started. This one says it is complete but looks like the start to a whole fic:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5216711/1/I_would_do_anything

He also started another about Mizore but I'm not sure whether he'll pick up with it:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5493113/1/The_Only_Way

[GrrDraxin]

I'm a bit confused about some other stories he has started. This one says it is complete but looks like the start to a whole fic:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5216711/1/I_would_do_anything

He also started another about Mizore but I'm not sure whether he'll pick up with it:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5493113/1/The_Only_Way
This first one [I_would_do_anything] is continued in one called: Ill Be Seeing You Soon (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5255495/1/Ill_Be_Seeing_You_Soon)

The second one is it's own thing, but it wasn't a tragedy like some of the others.

[weview]

Thats a real shame. I wish he had continued with the stories. They were actually really good ideas and he wrote them well enough to get caught up in.

[Tycho]

Yeah, I know this is relatively off topic, ok? Does anyone know how to make a new story category on fanfiction.net? I have some good ideas concerning some great manga I've read, but there isn't a category for them, and there is no apparent "New Category" button.

[GrrDraxin]

Not a clue, I've only been a member for 4 months.

[weview]

You may have to email the administrator and ask them to create one for you. Although I think its possible to create one when you edit information about your story, when it asks you to pick a category

[Tycho]

That's odd...oh well, I'll get to it sometime. Thanks. The stories are of 'Itoshi no Kana' and 'Arcana Soul', in case you're wondering. Both very nice supernatural manga that sort of hover under the radar.

And yes, I am purposely trying to subvert the thread's topic now xD. Good day.

[Tycho]

Oh, you guys are no fun. Oh well, I'm actually on topic this time! There's a really good fanfiction I was reading on FF.net. I believe it is called Rosario Vampire: Heat of Winter. It is a very well written story, and it's a little dark. I like it a lot. Like most fanfiction, the story is told quite differently than that of the actual manga, but, like I said, it's really well written anyway.

As for the plot...well, truthfully, it's hard to describe the plot without giving away the little plot twists that make it such a great story, so...just read it! The first three or four chapters are really, REALLY dark, but it get's better, just keep going!

The author's pen name is Des Morse Morde. I don't believe he's an FH member...but he's cool. Anyway, READ IT! I COMMAND THEE. K, peace.

[GrrDraxin]

Yeah, I've been following that one. Too bad it takes so long between updates. Though there is this one that recently got updated that takes the setting into The Old West, and it's not too shabby. Imagining Tsukune as the new sheriff, and Moka as the deputy, kinda makes one twist one's imagination. Kurumu's a bar wench, by the way, which kind of suits her.

[Tycho]

Ha yeah I heard about that one, but didn't bother to read it. I might rethink now.

New update coming to mine soon, look out for it within the next one or two days.

[victor]

sorry if this do-sent go here

tycho ur an awesome writer i re read ur fan fic and i picked up some details i mist before and a new chapter talk about hidden in twist and then that comment u left at about the sex scene lol keep them up

[Tycho]

I'm flattered at how extremely correct you are; I AM awesome, aren't I? That's right, bask in the warm beauty of yet another masterfully crafted post by Tycho: the man, the myth, the legend.

Ok, my godly moment is over. Yeah, thanks, actually when I started the story I had all intentions of making Inner Tsukune attracted to Inner Moka, but as it progressed I grew to hate him, and decided to kill him off for the better of the story. In actuality, I just inserted that character in the first place to try out an OC, but I have a better idea for an OC now, he'll be in my next R+V story.

[victor]

thx for response keep them up

[TigersDemon]

next story? really? 'bout what?

[Tycho]

Well I can't divulge too many details without spoiling the end of Transfusion (it'll be sequel), but it will revolve around an oc of mine, in all of his weirdness.

[LordRichardWellington]

Of course in Western legends I literally have yet to find a monster of any kind that has a personality other than 'purely evil, maniacal, and mischievious'. Western legends suck because everything from that area and that period was monopolized by the church, and half the stories were created to promote Christianity. Japanese legends are awesome because they have the capacity to give their spirits and yokai more actual personallity. This is because their primal religion revolved around spirits, benevolent and otherwise (everything from plants to rocks ro dirt had it's own spirit, as did things like houses, towns, and other man-made things). Actually, according to the stories, the original yokai were born from disgruntled spirits (this is a theme I intend to incorperate in my next story, actually).

I messed up when moving the post.

[GrrDraxin]

Just for all you people that like to analyze youkai social hierarchy, this fanfiction (Stranger in a Strange World) (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5572443/1/) breaks down the "why" youkai society has to hide from humans, and as of the latest chapter, throws Saizo's mentality of wanting to eat all the humans back in his and everyone else's faces. It's quite a good read, and get one thinking about the differences between how humans and youkai socialize.

[Yellowdorkfish]

Wow its been too long since i made a post. anyway, Ou-Rex is back on Fanfiction.net. I'm not sure if Ou-rex is going to put the stories back up and continue them, but i have gotten a review on one of my stories by her. For anyone who wants to know my stories are http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5623481/1/Breaking_the_Lock and http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5712828/1/Blood_Lust

[TigersDemon]

didn't ou-rex get shunted?

[GrrDraxin]

No, Rex just left to pursue other interests more vigorously, and if you manage to read the last completed story Rex wrote which was Origin of Ghoul, Knight-Bishop has that one under his wing with some info on what happened to Rex.

[Yellowdorkfish]

Well its official, Ou-rex is back and so will the stories. Ou-rex will be putting them back up 1 by 1, so lets all rejoice that we can read them again. :)

[GrrDraxin]

Yup she is, and I had a much needed heart to heart chat with her about it. So hopefully next time won't be happening like that incident again. I'll be supporting her as best I can to the best of my ability.

[Alhazad2003]

Hello everyone,

Wow, with all this talk about RV fanfiction, I thought I'd promote my own. Those of you who visit FF.net might've already heard of it, it's called Baddest Blood, a RV/Castlevania crossover. For those who haven't, the link is here - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4666178/1/RosarioVampire_Baddest_Blood I encourage everyone here to read and enjoy the fic. Review if you'd like, but above all, enjoy. Thanks in advance, and have a wonderful day.

[TigersDemon]

ahhh, the shameless plug, it returns :D

[Martini-562]

Shameless self promotion *bows head in shame*

I'm sorry, I just wish receive some more crit in order to make my stories better.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5464391/1/Nosferatu_to_Vampire

Basically what I imagined the super vampire bloodline to be like before a certain someone *cough* threw in the Alucard Shinso.....

Enjoy.

And no, Martinus Ardacul is not his real name, though if you look closely you'll find enough references to what his name might be like.

[Alhazad2003]

SHAMELESS PLUG ALERT


Hello everyone,

For anyone here who's had the chance to read my last fic, Baddest Blood, the next installment has already begun, which can be found here - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6100949/1/RosarioVampire_Death_of_a_Dream Read, review, and above all, enjoy. Take care, and have a wonderful day.