[Training] Training Run by Capcis

[capicis]

Sorry,
It took me so long to post, but I had a lot of school work to do. Sometimes being the first one of the list have its cons. Here is the link to my practice file
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=8BL6D9MT

[kenjimaru]

Yay. I move your post here so u get better critique and comments from people. Glad you back!!!

[capicis]

Thank's kenjimaru.

[kenjimaru]

Someone sure gonna come read your thread. Me too but not now :sorry:

[real0st]

Well....it kinda would help to tell if this was cleaning or typesetting. But I'm pretty sure this is a typeset. This is fairly good typeset. I don't do Gantz though (I do HQ OnePiece.) Some reason this chapter pisses me off (no offense) The guy crying is soo........annoying/whiny....

[kenjimaru]

Well....it kinda would help to tell if this was cleaning or typesetting. But I'm pretty sure this is a typeset.
Yeah, this typeset only.



Sorry,
..... Here is the link to my practice file
.....
So how long you take to typeset this chapter? Did you look at other scans why you do it?

So i go through you work. Very nice :Jump_Roll: over all. Here more comments. i use only 3 pages to do generalize comments
Page 01-- why you use pinkish color to remove text? i still see the pink color- you for remove it. i also see it in place like page 03. it should be white. Usually use white to remove black text and vice versa.

Page 02: You no use "Stroke" to border the big background text. U stroke white just like the original japanese text

Page 03: For place where it says "100 points ....". U use hypen for "points". it almost touch border and there is plenty space above and below in that bubble.

I go send PM to veni-sama to make you become Trainee- :D.

[capicis]

It was my 1st time using Photoshop, so I kind of learn my way around by trying different things. It took me around 3hrs. No, I did not look at other scans.

1. About the pinkish color, I had to figure out how to change the color and ups!:sorry:

2. Yes, I did not know how to do the outer glow effect, which was kind of tricky.

3. Yeah, I see your point the font was little to big, but the 100 points ... are dots. I know it looks like a Hyphen.:confused:

Thank you, your comments are well taken. I'll try my best to improve.:)

[kenjimaru]

oh i didnt say it proper. i mean for page 03 use hyphen. Like do it like this
100
poi-
nts
...

And its "stroke" not the outer glow. I send veni-sama PM that you ready for more lessons and be pirate so lets wait. U must decide you no become lazy when u become pirate.

[capicis]

oooooh!:tongue1:

[kenjimaru]

oooooh!:tongue1:
yeah, on the whole u did pretty good. Since u come in for typesetting i think you ready, no?

[real0st]

Well....IMO, typesetting is very easy if you know your grammar up to 8 years of english (middle school/high school). I use to typeset...but cleaning is so much more rewarding. But yeah...you pretty much went over the expectations of a typesetter. Now wait for your approval.