I tried a little cleaning and typesetting

[yami_no_tenshi1563]

I've been trying this for some while when I'm trying to make something good out of my time and I tried the ones in FH editor test pls. help me improve it ^^

One piece clean and typeset
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/4338/onepiecetestqv1.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/4338/onepiecetestqv1.c3dff3781c.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=123&i=onepiecetestqv1.png)

One piece raw
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7959/onepiecetestrawjy8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Blood + clean
[URL="http://imageshack.us"][IMG]http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/604/bloodtestvd0.png (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=293&i=onepiecetestrawjy8.jpg)
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/604/bloodtestvd0.37f8d55fdf.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=181&i=bloodtestvd0.png)

Blood + raw
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/1853/bloodtestrawxd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/1853/bloodtestrawxd6.9bebdc6dcf.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=181&i=bloodtestrawxd6.jpg)

Naruto clean not done with typeset yet
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6283/narutotestrs9.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6283/narutotestrs9.eedd2b88e8.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=123&i=narutotestrs9.png)

Naruto raw
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/4015/narutotestrawbv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/4015/narutotestrawbv3.7c77c782c9.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=293&i=narutotestrawbv3.jpg)

TRC color test
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7585/trccolortestli7.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7585/trccolortestli7.94e86157ba.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=123&i=trccolortestli7.png)

TRC color test raw
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/5640/trccolortestrawjg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/5640/trccolortestrawjg4.0800cc15cc.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=181&i=trccolortestrawjg4.jpg)

I'm not done with the skip beat tests yet I'll post this once I've done with them and yup comments please so that I can improve it ^^

[makhan]

O_O
Yami the Cleaner
:D

One Piece:
- crop more, get rid of the black strip on the right and on top
- level less, it's too dark (especially the sfxs)

Blood+
- crop more, get rid of the black strip on the left and that black thing on top (don't crop on top, just select and delete/fill with white)
- redrawing could be better, but it's not bad
- dunno if it's not a bit too dark, but even if, it's still good

Naruto
- so you don't denoise, eh?
- cleaning not finished, you need to get rid of this dust on Naruto

TRC color
- it's too small, I can't see a thing XD
- you were supposed to get rid of the text on the image (cloning) ;)

it's good for a first timer, but you still have to practice ;)
and read about denoising :]
good work so far

[Anon]

everything that makitty said and use less leveling and more burn tool ;)
And you are good to go for help in the SS typesetting :D
And here's a good denoising guide I'd recommend for beginners:
http://www.franky-house.com/forums/showthread.php?t=144

[yami_no_tenshi1563]

Okay I'll try doiing this and tht with denoising I'll just post again if I've done something better thanks for the comments ^^

[makhan]

ah, forgot to tell, that typesetting is good ;)
I have few mangas to typeset, you interested? (joking, I know you're busy, but in case you're interested it's TRC, Alive and Penguin Revolution ;P)

[yami_no_tenshi1563]

Maybe I'll try helping on Monday since I'll translate tomorrow though I hope it would be good

[yami_no_tenshi1563]

Okay I tried cleaning them again not done with the others yet will add them later or tomorrow

One piece:

[img=http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1595/onepiecetestrawcleanxx0.th.png] (http://img206.imageshack.us/my.php?image=onepiecetestrawcleanxx0.png)


Blood +:

[img=http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/8338/bloodtestcleanhw2.th.png] (http://img329.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bloodtestcleanhw2.png)

Can someone check them again please thanks ^^ and hope it improved

[Anon]

the OP page is pretty good, the greys are a bit too sensitive for my taste but it's still pretty good, and you forgot to burn the sfx in the last panel

Blood+ is also pretty good but you need to crop the sides so that those black parts would be removed :p

[endless]

yami, nice OP page, there! ;)
the grey is too ligt, maybe :p but yes, it still pretty good

and the Blood+ need the cropped more like Anon said XD

[makhan]

the only thing I want to add is about Blood+ page - invert the picture (ctrl+i) and use burn tool (~20%) on the black sfxs - they are too blurry (it needs only a slight touch-up)

op page is good, although you need to burn sfxs and maybe brooke's hand in the bottom right frame

good work, you can help with scanlating if you want ;)

[gdperrin]

at last you posted your cleans Yami..... ^^
good work..... like always

[yami_no_tenshi1563]

Version 3

One piece
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5277/onepiecetestrawcleanwl6.th.png (http://img138.imageshack.us/my.php?image=onepiecetestrawcleanwl6.png)

Blood +
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2289/bloodtestcleanru7.th.png (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bloodtestcleanru7.png)

Naruto
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6177/narutotestcleannd2.th.png (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=narutotestcleannd2.png)

[makhan]

waaaah, what did you do to the blood+ page XD
sfxs look much worse than earlier ;)

[shelisan]

Hello makhan!! hey do you have the penguin revolution chapters that are left cleaned?? I can do the typesetting! or if they are not clenaed yet I can do the cleaning part too, I haven't worked with you yet but I'm interested in working in the last chapters for PR (and I don't know if anybody is working with them yet!) I have experience in scanlation so I'm confident with both typesetting and cleaning (I'm an editor for a team) xDD

>o<
what do you think?