Jefu
04-08-2008, 11:32 PM
Well, this little written work of mine can be seen in two ways. One, very original or two, a fanfic of One Piece. Though it doesn't involve any existing characters (Other then maybe a mention once in a while) other then the ones I event. The story has nothing to do with luffy, or any of the strawhats, but it does take place in the same world. And unless the Strawhats go into the South blue at some time, I feel safe starting this fanfic there.
If this is suppose to be anywhere else (I'm pretty sure its in the right place) Just move it to the right location please.
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Quest for Fame
Arc 1: Assassination in Tekur, the Quest for Fame Begins!
Ch.1: Bloodstone O. Aerian.
Location: An Island in South blue: Tekur.
The day was warm, the clouds were, clear, the sky was blue, the breeze nice, the water was shimmering, the town was peaceful, the fish were jumping, the horizon was beautiful, and Aerian, the fisherman Fiishing shop owner, was sad. Today was, for Aerian, like any other day. His shop was empty, no one would buy from him. Every other shop around his was bustling with business, yet his shop was completely empty. practically a ghost shop. It was because he had an intimidating look to him. His name was not known, and he was not famous, but his looks made people look in another direction. He was 8'2, 623 Lb. individual, muscular, wore overalls with no shirt under it, and on his head was a fishing hat, with fishing hooks in it. He had tied atop his hat an odd shaped fruit. This alone would not scuffle his business though, it was the fact that he was a fishman. His specie being half fish, half Alligator. Ironically Aerian loved fishing and, to be frank, was really good at it. To top it off the place he currently resides happens to be a small little place called Tekur, located in the south blue. Tekur was, twenty years ago, held siege by a fish man pirate captain named Geov.
Geov was a horrible person who enjoyed using his specie of fish to sting opposing humans with his fins. Geov was a half man half Lion fish. Everyday Geov would take one individual from Tukar, regardless if the whole village payed or not, and tortured him with his barbs for the fun of it. Eventually the villagers grew sick of being torture slaves to this fish man and a huge rebellion occurred. Oddly enough, Geov died during the rebellion not of a wound, but of heart failure. Geov was born with a bad heart, and the rebellion was just too much for him. After this event villagers never looked at fishmen in the same light again, and would be prejudice towards the fishmen, whether or not their good or bad.
As a result, Aerian was not liked around the village, he was cursed at, charged double what humans were charged, and not allowed in most places. He was actually planning to move away (To the comfort of the villagers), and was in the process of building a fishing shop on a boat (Though, he wasn't good at building, so he was taking a long time, and he had no money, certainly not enough to buy a boat. He tried getting a temporary job at places to make some money, but no one accepted him. His only hope was that a miracle would occur and people would start buying from his fishing shop.
On this same, quiet, tranquil day, Aerian received his first customer, someone who was wanted by the military for his assassinations of high ranking marines and Navy officials. The mans name was "Flat Faced" Skiv, a small but violent man who made professional masks and disguises he wore when on a "Hunt". He came to the fishing shop to buy some fishing string for his masks. Skiv assassinated with a very rare weapon, the .2 Blazer, invented by the Military to conquer devil fruit users. The gun itself can blow a hole through iron, but the main shining attribute to this gun was its effect on the bullets put into it. It can only hold one bullet, but that bullet is nearly instantly coated with seastone when placed in the gun. In other words the gun produced seastone in its chamber.
Skiv was once a bounty hunter who was real famous for taking down big name Pirates and criminals. His highest accomplishment was the assassination of 263 Million Beli pirate known as "Steel Skinned" nill, who consumed the "Hard Hard Fruit", A devil fruit that hardens ones skin permanently. He became a criminal when he killed Vice Admiral Dekan. Both (And, to be honest, all) his kills were from a single shot to the back of his head. His bounty was put up for 84 million Beli, and is constantly being discussed whether to triple the bounty or not.
Anyhow, Skivs name has not reached tekur yet, and he felt safe roaming the village. His first stop being Aerians shop. Skiv bought fishing rod from an ecstatic Aerian, who was glad to have his first customer. This gleeful feeling would not last, for Skiv got greedy. Skiv pulled out his .2 blazer and pointed it at Aerians snout. Skiv usually doesn't rob from people, but he was low on money, and he figured hes done worst, so he attempted to rob from Aerian.
"Hey, Gator man, what I want you to do is open that cash register and give me all the money you have..."
"Huh?!"
"You heard me green man! Empty the register now or I'll put a bullet in your snout."
With a sigh, Aerian opened the register and turned it upside down. All that came out of it was lent. No Beli, not even a coin. Skiv stood there, with his flat face, emotionless. Skivs face turned to a shapeless anger.
"Your joking, right?! You have to be joking..."
"Nope! Heres all Ive got.''
Aerian picked up the money he previously got from Skivs purchase and placed it in his hand. Skiv snapped.
"Trying to make me look like a fool?! Die!
Before Skiv could pull the trigger, Aerian whipped his massive tail at his hand, knocking down the register in the process, and hitting the .2 Blazer out of Skivs hand. The gun flew backwards and landed behind some boxes. Skiv screamed in pain, but Skivs scream lasted but a second, for Aerian nailed him in the face with the back of his hand. Skiv fell to the ground, seemingly unconscious.Three villagers busted into the place, wondering what the commotion was all about. When they saw Skiv on the ground injured, not knowing he was a violent criminal, all three looked at Aerian and glared. One spoke up.
"Who the hell do you think you are?! Why did you attack this man?"
Seizing the opportunity, Skiv murmured from his his flat mouth.
"Wh- What did I do to get hit? I just wanted a fishing pole. I can't get up either."
Before Aerian could explain one of the villagers spoke up loudly.
"I knew it! All you fishmen are the same. Every single one of you are violent destruction loving beasts! I'm reporting you to the police!"
To Be Cont.
If this is suppose to be anywhere else (I'm pretty sure its in the right place) Just move it to the right location please.
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Quest for Fame
Arc 1: Assassination in Tekur, the Quest for Fame Begins!
Ch.1: Bloodstone O. Aerian.
Location: An Island in South blue: Tekur.
The day was warm, the clouds were, clear, the sky was blue, the breeze nice, the water was shimmering, the town was peaceful, the fish were jumping, the horizon was beautiful, and Aerian, the fisherman Fiishing shop owner, was sad. Today was, for Aerian, like any other day. His shop was empty, no one would buy from him. Every other shop around his was bustling with business, yet his shop was completely empty. practically a ghost shop. It was because he had an intimidating look to him. His name was not known, and he was not famous, but his looks made people look in another direction. He was 8'2, 623 Lb. individual, muscular, wore overalls with no shirt under it, and on his head was a fishing hat, with fishing hooks in it. He had tied atop his hat an odd shaped fruit. This alone would not scuffle his business though, it was the fact that he was a fishman. His specie being half fish, half Alligator. Ironically Aerian loved fishing and, to be frank, was really good at it. To top it off the place he currently resides happens to be a small little place called Tekur, located in the south blue. Tekur was, twenty years ago, held siege by a fish man pirate captain named Geov.
Geov was a horrible person who enjoyed using his specie of fish to sting opposing humans with his fins. Geov was a half man half Lion fish. Everyday Geov would take one individual from Tukar, regardless if the whole village payed or not, and tortured him with his barbs for the fun of it. Eventually the villagers grew sick of being torture slaves to this fish man and a huge rebellion occurred. Oddly enough, Geov died during the rebellion not of a wound, but of heart failure. Geov was born with a bad heart, and the rebellion was just too much for him. After this event villagers never looked at fishmen in the same light again, and would be prejudice towards the fishmen, whether or not their good or bad.
As a result, Aerian was not liked around the village, he was cursed at, charged double what humans were charged, and not allowed in most places. He was actually planning to move away (To the comfort of the villagers), and was in the process of building a fishing shop on a boat (Though, he wasn't good at building, so he was taking a long time, and he had no money, certainly not enough to buy a boat. He tried getting a temporary job at places to make some money, but no one accepted him. His only hope was that a miracle would occur and people would start buying from his fishing shop.
On this same, quiet, tranquil day, Aerian received his first customer, someone who was wanted by the military for his assassinations of high ranking marines and Navy officials. The mans name was "Flat Faced" Skiv, a small but violent man who made professional masks and disguises he wore when on a "Hunt". He came to the fishing shop to buy some fishing string for his masks. Skiv assassinated with a very rare weapon, the .2 Blazer, invented by the Military to conquer devil fruit users. The gun itself can blow a hole through iron, but the main shining attribute to this gun was its effect on the bullets put into it. It can only hold one bullet, but that bullet is nearly instantly coated with seastone when placed in the gun. In other words the gun produced seastone in its chamber.
Skiv was once a bounty hunter who was real famous for taking down big name Pirates and criminals. His highest accomplishment was the assassination of 263 Million Beli pirate known as "Steel Skinned" nill, who consumed the "Hard Hard Fruit", A devil fruit that hardens ones skin permanently. He became a criminal when he killed Vice Admiral Dekan. Both (And, to be honest, all) his kills were from a single shot to the back of his head. His bounty was put up for 84 million Beli, and is constantly being discussed whether to triple the bounty or not.
Anyhow, Skivs name has not reached tekur yet, and he felt safe roaming the village. His first stop being Aerians shop. Skiv bought fishing rod from an ecstatic Aerian, who was glad to have his first customer. This gleeful feeling would not last, for Skiv got greedy. Skiv pulled out his .2 blazer and pointed it at Aerians snout. Skiv usually doesn't rob from people, but he was low on money, and he figured hes done worst, so he attempted to rob from Aerian.
"Hey, Gator man, what I want you to do is open that cash register and give me all the money you have..."
"Huh?!"
"You heard me green man! Empty the register now or I'll put a bullet in your snout."
With a sigh, Aerian opened the register and turned it upside down. All that came out of it was lent. No Beli, not even a coin. Skiv stood there, with his flat face, emotionless. Skivs face turned to a shapeless anger.
"Your joking, right?! You have to be joking..."
"Nope! Heres all Ive got.''
Aerian picked up the money he previously got from Skivs purchase and placed it in his hand. Skiv snapped.
"Trying to make me look like a fool?! Die!
Before Skiv could pull the trigger, Aerian whipped his massive tail at his hand, knocking down the register in the process, and hitting the .2 Blazer out of Skivs hand. The gun flew backwards and landed behind some boxes. Skiv screamed in pain, but Skivs scream lasted but a second, for Aerian nailed him in the face with the back of his hand. Skiv fell to the ground, seemingly unconscious.Three villagers busted into the place, wondering what the commotion was all about. When they saw Skiv on the ground injured, not knowing he was a violent criminal, all three looked at Aerian and glared. One spoke up.
"Who the hell do you think you are?! Why did you attack this man?"
Seizing the opportunity, Skiv murmured from his his flat mouth.
"Wh- What did I do to get hit? I just wanted a fishing pole. I can't get up either."
Before Aerian could explain one of the villagers spoke up loudly.
"I knew it! All you fishmen are the same. Every single one of you are violent destruction loving beasts! I'm reporting you to the police!"
To Be Cont.