winnkey
04-02-2008, 09:59 AM
OK this is my first try without using a tut and i thought hey if i was going to do it i might as well do it big. so i did a whole chapter.
the chapter i did was the latest naruto one 395.
i had to do some line art or what ever when i had to delete big words over people and had to redraw the people, i suck at drawing so you dont really have to comment on how crappy a drawer i am cause i know.
on the first page i had a typo of technique i typed techinquw so yea i already know about that so please dont say anthing abot that. there was somethings that i did not know and what people could suggest as well. I do not know how to do a black text with a white border, so when it was not in a box i used some grey fudged up thing that does not look to good. so if anyone could tell me how to do that kind of font it would be great. also when doing the croc guy who talks to himself could people suggest a font i could use for the dark him when he talks. and also a font for the Jutsu's they use like fang dril etc.
thats about it so please tell me where i went wrong and how i can improve. O and i started at about 11:30 and finished at 6:30 but i did stop a lot, i watched a movie that went for about 1:30, had lunch, sat down and watched the news and talked to my mum a fair bit about something thats happening. so i would guess i was not doing it for about 3 hours maybe more so if i add that into account it took me 4 hours about maybe less.
anyway here is the link
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SF7LU8B4
O and final note my raw did not have 17 so i just got one of OM and used it in its place.
the chapter i did was the latest naruto one 395.
i had to do some line art or what ever when i had to delete big words over people and had to redraw the people, i suck at drawing so you dont really have to comment on how crappy a drawer i am cause i know.
on the first page i had a typo of technique i typed techinquw so yea i already know about that so please dont say anthing abot that. there was somethings that i did not know and what people could suggest as well. I do not know how to do a black text with a white border, so when it was not in a box i used some grey fudged up thing that does not look to good. so if anyone could tell me how to do that kind of font it would be great. also when doing the croc guy who talks to himself could people suggest a font i could use for the dark him when he talks. and also a font for the Jutsu's they use like fang dril etc.
thats about it so please tell me where i went wrong and how i can improve. O and i started at about 11:30 and finished at 6:30 but i did stop a lot, i watched a movie that went for about 1:30, had lunch, sat down and watched the news and talked to my mum a fair bit about something thats happening. so i would guess i was not doing it for about 3 hours maybe more so if i add that into account it took me 4 hours about maybe less.
anyway here is the link
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SF7LU8B4
O and final note my raw did not have 17 so i just got one of OM and used it in its place.