Training by pXDRAGONXq

[pXDRAGONXq]

Thanks for all the help! XD

Sorry it took a while to finish, but i had to read all the tutorials + some other ones. :D

This is my first clean, so try to not go easy on me because i know that i need to improve ;)

I redrew the lines that got faded (most of the clouds) and i made the white lines stand out

I think that i did a pretty decent job for my first time, the only thing im not happy with is that I could not figure out how to do the grays for the NARUTO logo


http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1687/narutotestcleanedthefinyt5.png (http://imageshack.us)

[kenjimaru]

This is final application thread. For training and comment i move this thread to right section.

[Anon]

I say not bad except for the sign XD, but the white lines on Naruto's clothes look kinda unnatural now...I mean it's good, but just unnatural
Can you clean smt with a bit more greys since Naruto only had a lil' bit on that sign and from that it seems overleveled XD. Try smt like OP or DGM ;)

[pXDRAGONXq]

Sure, I'll work on it

[Odinn]

the shading lines on his face look wrong being broken, and i think if u really cant do the greys the sign would look better all black and no greys than really bad greys by leaving them alone

[mab]

i would say very nice but yeah the lines are weird XD and u seems to have problem with the greys but other than that for now it is good

[B-One]

Overleveling and bad gray is normal when you start. Don,t give up and try to tweak your settings a bit.^^

[pXDRAGONXq]

Hey guys!

I've been training and messing around with the settings of neat image and photoshop to find MY way to do cleaning, it took a looooooong time >.<

Anyway, since Anon suggested me to try OP or DGM i decided to give it a shot + don't tell anyone I got bored waiting for R+V ch 34 so i started cleaning to kill some time ;)

I cleaned the raw like six times, each one using different levels, filters and other stuff :p

I think this is the closest i got to endless cleaning, this is my second time cleaning so let me know what i can improve XD



http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/5172/dgm15rawtw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/3718/dgm15rawdragoncleanedlp3.png (http://imageshack.us)


PS. I just saw mab's post in tripham's thread about posting all of the steps he used, should i do the same thing?

[kenjimaru]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1779/dgm15rawfn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/3718/dgm15rawdragoncleanedlp3.png (http://imageshack.us)


PS. I just saw mab's post in tripham's thread about posting all of the steps he used, should i do the same thing?
Very very good. if you do just levelling, neatimage, and burn this is good result. Page you post can be used for release. Although improvement is possible.

I cleaned the raw like six times, each one using different levels, filters and other stuff :pThis is what is good. You gonna join soon. Try one more random page while we work on the forum. Then you gonna get in and train more.

[pXDRAGONXq]

Alright! FH is working great XD

Thanks for the feedback kenjimaru and here is the next clean

I HOPE I DID A GOOD JOB (fingers crossed)

I cleaned the raw like 3-4 times this one, guess im getting better ^^


raw http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8870/onepiecetestrawff8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

cleaned http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3027/onepiecetestdragoncleanbs8.png (http://imageshack.us)

[kenjimaru]

Good result for speedscan - still improvement needed. Like grey in sfx look dark. i think you are ready. So, You gonna be available to try your hands on clean this weekend for FH?

[pXDRAGONXq]

sure!, i'll give it a shot XD

what should i clean?

[pXDRAGONXq]

I just had to RE-EDIT some spoilers for my cleaned pages a few posts back :(

Idk what happened to them, they were just not there when i clikeced the spoiler sign

can anyone tell me what could have happened?


PS Don't forget to comment on them