1st time cleaning..

[DemiGod]

hello... is there something for me to clean or do i just post a cleaned page here?? if so, pls give me the RAW, i wanna try cleaning.. i only got basic in PS but i'm willing to do my best..

[endless]

try this one
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8392/13yu7.th.jpg (http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=13yu7.jpg)

[DemiGod]

thanks... but i don't think i'll be able to upload my work in instant.. i don't have that much time.. thanks for your RAW..

[endless]

i don't push you to make it in instant XD
just do your best :D

[DemiGod]

hmm... i don't really get it...
how about this? anything else to fix?
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/1591/1sttryji7.th.jpg (http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1sttryji7.jpg)

[Anon]

Well, hmmm... Did you denoise this coz it looks to me like you didn't and that you just leveled it and cleaned it up a bit XD..you even forgot to crop
Here's a tutorial on preclean that you should read http://www.franky-house.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2047

[Odinn]

not bad its viewable but you didnt really get rid of the noise, that is the white dots on black and the black/grey on white, well maybe most of the whites but the black areas needs to be done,if you dont have a burn tool use the paint brush and/or pen, but i dont use photoshop so dont look to me for more detail

[endless]

yeah, denoised it.
and read tutorial pre clean that Anon post, it'll help you to improve your skill

[DemiGod]

denoise??
what if i use the brush tool to sharpen the black? guess it'll take much time..XD
thx for the tutorial, but i don't have the Neat Image.

[endless]

search by google or yahoo then XD
and i suggest you to use NI, but maybe Anon can give you another choices since he doesn't like to use NI

[DemiGod]

nah i'll download it right away.. XD
so that app is needed to denoise right?

[endless]

yup, that's right :D
once you clean it properly, show us the result :D
and i don't push you to make it fast :p

[DemiGod]

here's another one...
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1351/testnl6.th.jpg (http://img138.imageshack.us/my.php?image=testnl6.jpg)
i'm an impatient one, after all..XD
so, how about it? i use brush after denoise it with NI to sharpen the black..

[endless]

Demi, use burn tool!!!! :p
it's almost the same like before i think
you need to remove the blurry, remove the dust, and i think you overdenoised it :p
btw, read more tutorials :D
hmm, if you use brush tool, use it after you use burn tool, i suggest

[DemiGod]

burn tool used..
of course there's a different, the first one has so many dots.! XD
the second, well, without burn tool..
this is the third:
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/909/test2ed1.th.jpg (http://img247.imageshack.us/my.php?image=test2ed1.jpg)

[endless]

hmmm, Demi, could you see the first panel?
there's still blurry, it means you overdenoised it, so when you leveled again, it comes blurry..
and don't use brush tool too much, i think you used it too much XD
i think you want another raw??
and make it 1200px height, okay?

[Anon]

Ok demigod don't listen to endless the picture is good it's not that muuch over-denoised but it's the eraser that you're using to delete the kanji....you don't actualy erase it you go over it with something that's not white XD and everywhere on the pic there are small parts of grey left where you need to use the dodge tool...everything is a bit overleveled as well ... try harder and don't use just any tool thatr you can see but try to use the tools from the tutorials

[DemiGod]

alright, i'll try again..
the 4th cleaned page may be a little longer, pls be patient (i know, no one's waiting..)

[DemiGod]

i don't really get it lol... i cleaned the leftover..
here it is...
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6586/test3fs8.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=test3fs8.jpg)
another RAW pls, i'm f@C^ing tired of this one.. lol
btw, is my skill qualified to join the team? T.T

[endless]

ok, good job!!
i think, it's much better :D
but you ruin the last panel :p
if you want to remove the text, you should use brush too, set the colour to white
i think i can give you another raw, you want to try? :p

[DemiGod]

all right..!!
can i join the team? T.T

[endless]

it's depend on admin, Demi :p
just wait until they see your page and maybe they'll decide you'll join now or later, but you'll join definitely, we only need to see your improvement :D
be patient, okay?? :D
hmm, maybe digi will give you the test, but until then, i'll give you this raw XD
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/8624/onepiece482pg12wo0.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=onepiece482pg12wo0.jpg)

and Demi, make it 1200px height when you're finished on the page

[DemiGod]

okay, wait for the cleaned page..:p
must i clean the text in the bubble too? by using what? just color it or brush it? thanks!

[endless]

yeah, you should, do it with brush tool set to white colour
wait to see it ^^

[Anon]

No just erase it, it's easier and that's a nice Raw endless...maybe I'll clean it and then give it to others as a test XD